21st Century Darling

Well, I was going to post this in the German forum thing...but I know VERY little German and had to look up almost every word, haha.

Anyway...

I am writing a short letter to my German friends parents. Her mom knows alot of English, but I thought it would be a bit more meaningful to write it in German.

I really need help. As I said before, I know VERY little German.

This is what I want to write:

"Dear Mr. and Mrs. Wagner,

I just wanted to write you to tell you how lovely your family is! Vanessa, Lissy, and Silke are very sweet girls, I love them very much! And you did a wonderful job in raising them :-)

Love,
~Liny~"

I asked someone else for help (their native language is Dutch, haha) and they told me this:

"ich wolte dich nur schreiben um zu sagen wie toll deine Familie ist. Vanessa, Lissy und Silke sind ganz liebe madchen, Ich liebe ihnen ganz viel.

Liebe,
~Liny~"

But I would stilllike to double check. And what about the Mr. and Mrs. in the begining?

Gosh I feel dumb, haha. But still, it would be alot of help. And I don't want to ask my German friends because that kind of ruins it...although, I not quite sure what it ruins o.O

DANKE! :-P

21st Century Darling

Oha....did I post this in the wrong forum or something?

Sorry ^^;

nallatu

you did post in the wrong forum...you should have put your message in a german-english forum...you'd see answers come quicker that way

Here are my suggestions to ameliorate what your Dutch friends wrote :

Liebe Herr und Frau Wagner

Ich wollte Ihnen nur schreiben, um zu sagen, wie toll Ihre Familie ist. Vanessa, Lissy und Silke sind ganz liebe Mädchen, ich liebe sie ganz viel! Sie haben wirklich von Ihnen eine gute Erziehung genossen

Liebe,
~Liny~

21st Century Darling

Aww, thanks! Sorry for posting in the wrong forum...I'm not quite use to it here, yet >_> its a bit confusing....

*hugs you*

Thanks again, its a big help.