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Old 01-25-2017, 02:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Înviere - Tudor Arghezi

De când mi-ai pus capul pe genunchi, mi-e bine.
Nu știam că ma voi vindeca de mine, cu tine.
Vorbele, gândurile, împletirile crezusem că-mi ajung.
Nu știam. Mi-au zvâcnit umerii, mi-au crescut brațele: fusesem ciung.
Mi-am simțit coapsele, gleznele, spinarea, tari ca un luptător.
M-am vindecat și m-am născut, sărutându-ți talpa unui picior.
Fusesem slăbănog, fusesem orb, rătăcit
Între uragane, miazănoapte și răsărit.
Mâna-ți atârnă-n nisip și pietriș,
Linsă de valul curmeziș
Care vine-mblânzit să-ți pupe unghiile, inelele și-o brățară,
Și îți aduce daruri dintr-alta țară,
Zale rupte, firimituri de coifuri și de scuturi,
O poala de odăjdii argintii și fluturi.
Pentru leacurile din măceșii sânului tău
Am înfruntat mania lui Dumnezeu.
Vezi? Corabia din zare plutește lin, plecată pe sfert,
Plumbuită ca într-un nămol de cositor fiert.
Merge marea, merge cerul împovărat de stele.
Numai corabia și noi ne-am oprit intre ele.
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Très joli mais pas facile à en traduire le sens élégiaque dans la même rythmique.
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Are o potcoavă şi-i mai trebuie trei şi calul
il a un fer à cheval, il lui en faut encore.....3 et .......le cheval
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Avec un petit effort .

Jocelyneeee , pe unde mai umbli?
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Allez, un petit effort !
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Résurrection Tudor Arghezi

Depuis que tu as mis ta tête sur mes genoux, Je vais bien.
Je ne savais pas que je pouvais me guérir, avec toi.
Les mots, les pensées, les entrelacs j'ai cru qu'ils m'arrivaient .
Je ne savais pas. Mes épaules se sont crispées, mes bras ont grandi: j'avais été manchot.
Je sentis mes cuisses, mes chevilles, le dos, forts, comme un lutteur.
Je me suis guéri et je suis né, embrassant la plante de tes pieds.
J'avais été maigre, j'avais été aveugle, égaré
Entre les ouragans, le nord et Orient.
Ta main accrochée dans le sable et le gravier,
Balayée par la vague en oblique
Venant baiser, apprivoiser tes ongles, bagues et bracelet,
Et t'apportant des cadeaux d'un autre pays,
Heaumes brisés, miettes de coiffes et de boucliers,
Un bas de vêtements d'argent et de papillons .
Comme remèdes de l'églantier de ton sein
J'ai affronté la colère de Dieu.
Vois ? le bateau qui flotte doucement au loin, parti pour un quart
Plombé comme dans une boue d'étain fondu.
La mer ondoie comme un ciel chargé d'étoiles.
Seule la barque et nous nous sommes arrêtés entre eux.
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Résurrection Tudor Arghezi

Depuis que tu as mis ta tête sur mes genoux, Je vais bien.
Je ne savais pas que je pouvais me guérir, avec toi.
Les mots, les pensées, les entrelacs j'ai cru qu'ils m'arrivaient .
Je ne savais pas. Mes épaules se sont crispées, mes bras ont grandi: j'avais été manchot.
J'ai sentis mes cuisses, mes chevilles, le dos, forts, comme un lutteur.
Je me suis guéri et je suis né, embrassant la plante de tes pieds.
J'avais été maigre, j'avais été aveugle, égaré
Entre les ouragans, le nord et Orient.
Ta main accrochée dans le sable et le gravier,
Balayée par la vague en oblique.
Venant baiser apprivoisée tes ongles, bagues et bracelet,
Et t'apportant des cadeaux d'un autre pays,
Heaumes brisés, miettes de coiffes et de boucliers,
Un bas de vêtements d'argent et de papillons .
Comme remèdes de l'églantier de ton sein
J'ai affronté la colère de Dieu.
Vois? le bateau qui flotte doucement au loin, parti pour un quart
Plombé comme dans une boue d'étain fondu.
La mer bouge comme le ciel chargé d'étoiles.
Seule la barque et nous nous sommes arrêtés entre eux.
Tu vois Michel que tu peux ! Un grand bravo !
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Merciiiiiiiiiii

J'ai mis "ondoie" plus poétique à la place de "bouge"
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