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Old 10-22-2005, 01:04 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi, here are some phrases which were translated from Russian into English. But I'm not sure if the translation is good enough.

I hope that some native speaker would read it and say one's own opinion:


The Irish Republican Army has announced complete decommissioning. Thus it has put an end to the IRA armed campaign for the unification of Ireland, which had lasted for 36 years.
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Hi Katyafiona,

This is a good translation . Obviously I have not read the original but I would suggest a few minor tweakings so that it reads more naturally:

The Irish Republican Army has announced that its decommissioning is now complete, thus putting an end to its 36-year armed campaign for a unified Ireland.
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