leni84

Salut,

alors voilà, j'ai un devoir à rendre pour demain, et j'aimerais bien que quelqu'un lise mon "oeuvre", histoire de me corriger des fautes...

J'ai pratiquement tout fait au dico, donc je suis vraiment pas sûre de moi!

Tout ce qui me pose problème, je l'ai mis en rouge...mais ça serait sympa de lire tout, histoire de voir si le reste est bon...

Il y a aussi pas mal d'expressions récurentes, donc si vous avez des expressions équivalentes.... je suis preneuse!

Je vous dit quand même de quoi ça parle: je dois raconter un voyage, avec toutes les étapes. Etant donné que je ne suis jamais partie en Australie, je dois l'imaginer et écrire au présent.

Voilà!

Merci!

(tout ce qui est en bleu est déjà corrigé)

1/That’s it ! It’s the D-day! it's 50 past 12, in 10 minutes, we are going to take off to Australia!
2/ It's 19h30, our plane is landing. In a few moments, we are going to tread the australian soil!
We put up at the Holiday Inn Hotel. We are going to stay somewhere around, just to have a rest.
3/It's already (jour) and we did not see anything of Australia yet.
But, today, we are going to discover it ! We are free!
We have resolved to go on a one hour cruise in the Sydney Bay on board a catamaran. Afterwards, we are going to the vineyards of Hunter Valley to taste the australian great wines.

On the stroke of twelve, we are going to the “Summit”, this swivel restaurant (restaurant tournant) which offers an impressive Sydney view of 360°! (qui offre une vue spectaculaire de 360° sur Sydney)

This afternoon, we are going to go for a walk in the city, to see the famous Sydney Opera House with its great white sailes which unfurl in the sky, we are going to cross the bay thanks to the renowned Sydney Farbour Bridge. We are going to stroll through the Rocks Quarter where we can go to Bondi Beach, very valued by surfers.

4/ After a good night, we are ready for a new day in Sydney. This morning, we are going for all the day exploring in the Sydney Bay on board the ferry “Sydney Explorer” stopping one hour every “spot”. It’s a guided tour .......(Visite guidée suivie d’une croisière déjeuner dans la baie.)

5/ Third and last day in Sydney! Today, we are going to explore Blue Mountains on four-wheel drive. It’s a beautiful panorama on the “Three Sisters”, majestic limestone pillars which dominate the landscape. We can observe kangaroos in a wildlife reserve. avant de savourer thé et café ds le bush. Déjeuner en cours d’excursion.

6/ Sydney, it’s finished ! Today, destination :Melbourne ! We are flying to Melbourne. We put up at the Grand Chancellor Hotel. We have a cat. E voiture pour 4 personnes mise à notre disposition .We are free all the day to enjoy Melbourne. This morning, we are visiting the town, among others, the botanical garden and the Captain Cook’s cottage.

This midday, we are going to the “Donovan” restaurant, near to the St Kilda Beach.

After, we are spending the afternoon on the Phillip Island, where we can be at the penguins’ display (parade des pingouins). At sunset, we can observe the penguins’ show.

We are coming back to our hotel.

7/ Early in this morning, we are leaving from Melbourne for Geelong. We are covering the Great Ocean Road, along which we are going across areas where (il fait bon surfer) and popular coastal villages as Lorne, Torquay, considered as the capital of australian surf, Bells Beach and Anglesa, where we are playing golf on a way right in middle of kangaroos are fooling around.

We make a stop for the night in the coastal city of Warrnambool.





8/ Today, we are visiting the Museum of Sea in Warrnambool since the city is an old port of whale and seal hunt. Unfortunately, it isn’t winter and so, we can’t observe the white whales’ movements from the platform of Logan’s Beach. We are off to Coonawara, whom vineyards product some of the great vines in Australia.

We make a stop for the night in the middle of vineyards, in a Bed & Breakfast.

9/ This morning, we are leaving for Naracoorte. We are making a stop at the Bool Lagoon Game Reserve, 600-hectares-marsh-zone (zone de 600hectares de marais) among the most noteworthy of Southern Australia, to observe birds.

Then, we are off to one of the Mecca of world heritage: the Limestone Caves of Naracoorte. We are visiting the famous Victoria Fossil Cave, where we can discover fossils of mammals dating back to some 350 000 years. We are continuing towards Kingston and the National Park of Coorong, with lagoons which are separated from the ocean by enormous white-sand dunes. After the Coorong, we are off to go across the Adelaïde Hills. Towards the end of the day, we are arriving in Adelaïde. We are putting up at the Grosvenor Hotel.

10/ This morning, we are flying to Kangaroo Island. In fact, it’s a national park where evolve freely an extremely important animal life and particularly, only animals we meet in Australia.

(voiture)

We are discovering this island which measures (145 km →en miles) 145 km long and 57 km wide ( 145 km de long par 57 dans sa plus grande largeur). We are putting up at the Bed & Breakfast Open House. We are dining at the Open House.

11/ Towards the end of the day, we are taking back the car at the airport. After, we are taking plane for Adelaide. We are putting up at the Ensenada Hotel.

12/ This morning, we are flying to Ayers Rock. . We are putting up at the Outback Pioneer Hotel.

This afternoon, we are leaving for (les monts Olga)

Towards the end of the afternoon, we are coming back to Ayers Rock to admire the sunset, we are lucky since we can see the monolith to turn (rouge orangé).

We are coming back to the hotel.

13/ This morning, we are coming back on the site to climb the base of Ayers Rock. We are luck to meet members of an Aboriginal tribe. We are leaving for King’s Canyon. We are putting up at the King’s Canyon Resort.

14/ Today, we are going exploring in the beautiful canyon. We are climbing up the crest during two hours and half. We are making a flight over the canyon on board a helicopter during 15 minutes ( survol de 15 minutes). So, we can discover its weird formation where, on its summit, a little river runs. We are leaving for Alice Springs. We are putting up at the Aurora Hotel.

15/ Today, we are free to discover Alice Springs!

16/ A long drive day in sight to rejoin Tennant Creek, a city which found fame at the time of the gold rush. Nowadays, it’s a point of stop ( un point de relais) for people go from Alice Springs to Darwin. We make a stop to photograph the Devils Marbles. Today, we see for the first time the famous “Road Trains”. We are putting up at the Bluestone Hotel.

17/ Today, a long drive day awaits us before rejoining Katherine.We make a stop to Daly Waters where we are visiting its famous pub. We are leaving for Mataranka. We are stopping to go bathing in the natural thermal swimming pool where the water (sortir de) bowels of ground. (à plus de 30 °).

We are arriving in Katherine (at last!) and we are putting up at the Mercure Hotel.

18/ This morning, we are going on a two- hours cruise to the Katherine’s Gorges. We are exploring the two first gorges. Then, we are going back to the bank ( rive) and we are off to the National Park of Kakadu. We are putting up at the Gagudju Cooinda Lodge.

19/ This morning, we are going on a two-hours cruise on the Yellow Water’s Lagoon. We can discover birds by the hundreds (de races différentes), evolving freely, water buffalos and especially famous crocodiles. We are discovering Aboriginal sites of Nourlangie and of Ubirr, too.

We are coming back to the Gagudju Cooinda to spent the night.

20/ We are discovering the Kakadu Park. Then, we are leaving for the Litchfield National Park. We are putting up at the Lake Bennett Resort in a bedroom with lake view. We are swiming in the lake and going canoeing.

21/ We are discovering the Litchfield Park with its weird giant magnetic termite mounds (dont certaines dépassent les 3 m de hauteur). We are swimming in waterfalls. We are leaving for Darwin, we are arriving towards the end of the afternoon. We are putting up at the Saville Hotel. We are going into town.

22/ We are taking back the car at the airport and are flying for Cairns. We are putting up at the Colonial Club Hotel.

23/ Around 7h30, we are taking on board a beautiful catamaran thanks to which we are rejoining the Great Barrier Reef and the coralline islet of “Michaelmas Cay”.We have a buffet lunch on board. We are diving with bottle. Then, we (prendre place) on board a semi-submersible with glass walls which make it possible to discover local fauna and flora.

We are returning to Cairns towards 17h.

24/ We are leaving at 7h for the station of Cairns. We (prendre place) on board the famous train of Kuranda which, at the beginning of the century, was used to (descendre le minerai d'étain du plateau d'Atherton jusqu'au port de Cairns). Nowadays, it’s reconverted into scenic train. We are covering vast fields of sugar cane, we are crossing tunnels and can admire splendid waterfalls. We are finally arriving at the station of Kuranda, decorated with flowers.

We are continuing the trip by car and by amphibious car allowing us to discover the tropical flora of the region.

We are returning to Cairns by cable car.

25/ Today, we are free to enjoy our last day in the tropics. This morning, we are going to make white water rafting. This afternoon, we are flying over the Great Barrier Reef on board a helicopter, just to recuperate of this morning.

26/ We are leaving for the airport where we are going to take plane which take us back in France.

27/ Our travel is finished. We come back to the reality ! We are arriving to Paris at 6h.

The_FD

aller je t'en fait qqunes

1/That’s it ! It’s the D-day! it's 50 past 12, in 10 minutes, we are going to take off to Australia!
2/ It's 7h30, our plane is landing. in a few moments, we are going to tread the australian soil!

We put up at the Holiday Inn hotel. We are going to stay somewhere around, just to have a rest.

3/( ns sommes déjà tel jour et n’avons encore rien vu de l’Australie)
It is already (jour) and we did not see anything of Australia yet

But, today, we are going to discover it ! We are free!

We have decided to go on a one hour cruise in the Sydney Bay, on board of a catamaran. Afterwards, we are going to the vineyards of Hunter Valley to taste the australian great wines.

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L'histoire de la famille Bourdillon
Les fêtes d'Hébé
The flying dancer dancing

leni84

Merci beaucoup! c'est déjà ça!
J'espère que d'autres vont suivre maintenant....

J'ai l'impression que la longueur les décourage alors que finalement, c'est un peu toujours la même chose...

The_FD

Aller encore un petit bout


At noon, we are going to the “Summit”, this swiveling restaurant which offers an impressive 360° view of Sydney !

This afternoon, we are going to () walk in the city, to see the famous Sydney Opera House with its great white sailes which unfurl (?? pas compris) in the sky, we are going to cross the bay thanks to the renovated Sydney Farbour Bridge. We are going to stroll through the Rocks Quarter where we can go to Bondi Beach, very appreciated by surfers.

4/ After a good night, we are ready for a new day in Sydney. This morning, we are going to explore all day long () the Sydney Bay on board of the ferry “Sydney Explorer”. It stops one hour at every “spot”. It’s a guided tour followed by a lunch cruise in the bay.

5/ Third and last day in Sydney! Today, we are going to explore the Blue Mountains on a four-wheel drive. It’s a beautiful panorama on the “Three Sisters”, majestic limestone pillars which dominates the landscape. We can observe kangaroos in a wildlife reserve prior to enjoy tea and coffee at the bush (?? bush??). Lunch while on the trip

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L'histoire de la famille Bourdillon
Les fêtes d'Hébé
The flying dancer dancing

leni84

COOL!
MERCI, allez les autres ... un pti effort, svp!
Je suis là jusqu'à 9h!