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Old 06-09-2008, 02:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default URGENT!!! Lettre de motivation pour candidature Master 2

Bonjour à tous,

Je suis actuellement en première année de Master de Communication et souhaite postuler à un MAster 2 Administration des Entreprises.
La dossier de candidature inclus une lettre de motivation en anglais.

J'en ai rédigé une mais mon texte me semble trop proche du français et j'aimerais avoir l'avis de natifs anglais ou de personnes ayant un anglais courant...

Ceci est très urgent car je dois envoyer mon dossier demain.
Je vous remercie mille fois par avance pour votre aide précieuse!

Jennifer


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Dear Ms Brenet,

I am in my first year of Master MASCI (Master of International Communication Strategy) in Dijon, and I am searching for a Master 2 which would permit me to achieve my professional aspirations: managing projects in the event or humanitarian field.

My academic career allowed me to obtain a good grounding in communication and languages as well as some knowledge of economy, law, accounting and marketing. However, this knowledge has to be completed by skills in management, essential for my professional plans.

The master you offer can provide me those skills. In addition, I am particularly attracted by the pluridisciplinary aspect of the course and its straights links with the business world which made it a recognised diploma that enables to aspire to high responsibility jobs.

I am sincerely convinced of having the qualities required for this master: my motivation leans on qualities which served my previous professional experiences, as meticulousness, rigour, organisation and perseverance

I would be delighted to supply any further information you may require.

Yours sincerely,

Jennifer Da Silva
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c'est pas mal du tout, je n'ai changé que 2 ou 3 bricole. Par contre tu as une phrase trop longue, il faudrait la reformuler

Dear Ms Brenet,

I am in my first year of Master MASCI (Master of International Communication Strategy) in Dijon, and I am looking for for a Master 2 which would let me achieve my professional aspirations: managing projects in the event or humanitarian fields.

My academic career allowed me to obtain a good background in communication and languages as well as some knowledge in economy, law, accounting and marketing. However, this knowledge has to be completed by skills in management, essential for my professional plans.

The master you offer can provide me those skills. In addition, I am particularly attracted by the pluridisciplinary aspect of the courses and its straight links with the business world which made it a recognised diploma that enables to aspire to high responsibility jobs. (phrase trop longue, je te conseille de la couper).

I am sincerely convinced of having the qualities required for this master: my motivation leans on qualities which served my previous professional experiences, as meticulousness, rigour, organisation and perseverance

I would be delighted to supply any further information you may require.

Yours sincerely,

Jennifer Da Silva
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Merci beaucoup d'avoir répondu ausis rapidement!
J'ai bien pris note de vos remarques et vais de ce pas modifier ma lettre!
Merci encore,

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Dear Ms Brenet,

I am in my first year of Master MASCI (Master of International Communication Strategy) in Dijon, and I am looking for for a Master 2 which would let me achieve my professional aspirations: managing projects in the event or humanitarian fields.

My academic career allowed me to obtain a good background in communication and languages as well as some knowledge in economy, law, accounting and marketing. However, this knowledge has to be completed by skills in management, essential for my professional plans.

The master you offer can provide me those skills. In addition, I am particularly attracted by the pluridisciplinary aspect of the courses and its straight links with the business world. These two points made it a recognised diploma that enables to aspire to high responsibility jobs.

I am sincerely convinced of having the qualities required for this master: my motivation leans on qualities which served my previous professional experiences, as meticulousness, rigour, organisation and perseverance

I would be delighted to supply any further information you may require.

Yours sincerely,

Jennifer Da Silva
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