Quelqu'un peut-il m'aider à corriger mes fautes ? THANKS

lolo1111 · 05-06-2008, 05:02 PM

Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger les fautes d'orthographe ? Merci d'avance

Le sujet : A few month later, the young woman writes to her wealthy parents about her decision to live with an improverished jazz musician?

15th April 2003

Dear Dad, dear Mum,

It was kind of you to write to me. I' m very sorry I haven' t written for so long, but it happens a extraordinary thing !
I met a man. ( Mum, Do are you satisfies? It has been a long time that you want that I met somebody !) I met Peter in a jazz club in the Fulham Road. Peter was the pianist (Dad are you happy that he is a musician as you ?).
The bar was rather gloomy ! As soon as I entered, I wanted to go out , but... Peter was here! He played piano, calmly. He was so elegant, so mysterious. I thought that we were made for each other. Whatever he made do, I was already in love with him !

When he took his break we spoke together,he comes from South East London, he lives in a small apartment.
He admitted to me some week after that he wasn't a professional pianist. In the truth, he looked for a job. Some week later, he found a job. He is salesman in a butcher's.

It has been 3 months since we see each other. Then I decided to live with him in my apartment to South Kensington. He accepted and will move in, in 2 weeks. He sold his apartment, and with his money we will make works in our apartment. We will buy a new sofa and we will paint the bed room in yellow.
Peter is satisfied because I have a piano.

Weeks pass and we both agree with each other!

There's no fix the date of the marriage left...

The Lot of love from Madie

Merci de votre aide

Laure

Richnico · 05-07-2008, 08:02 AM

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Originally Posted by lolo1111

Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger les fautes d'orthographe ? Merci d'avance

Le sujet : A few month later, the young woman writes to her wealthy parents about her decision to live with an improverished jazz musician?

15th April 2003

Dear Dad, dear Mum,

It was kind of you to write to me. I'm very sorry I haven't written for so long, but an extraordinary thing has happened !
I've met a man. ( Mum, are you satisfied now ? It has been a long time that you wanted me to meet somebody !) I met Peter in a jazz club on the Fulham Road. Peter was the pianist (Dad are you happy that he is a musician like you ?).
The bar was rather gloomy ! As soon as I entered, I wanted to leave, but... Peter was there! He played the piano, calmly. He was so elegant, so mysterious. I thought that we were made for each other. Whatever he did, I was already in love with him !

When he took his break we spoke together, he comes from South East London where he lives in a small flat.
He admitted to me a few weeks later that he wasn't a professional pianist. In fact, he was looking for a job. Some weeks later, he found a job working in a butcher's.

We have been seeing each other for 3 months now. Then I decided to invite him to live with me in my flat to South Kensington. He accepted and will move in, in 2 weeks. He sold his flat, and with his money we will do up my flat. We will buy a new sofa and we will paint the bed room yellow. Peter is pleased because I have a piano.

Weeks pass and we both agree with each other! (si tu veux dire qu'ils s'entendent bien je propose "we both get on really well together")

There's no fix the date of the marriage left...(- désolé cela ne se comprend pas en anglais ! si tu veux dire il ne reste plus qu'à fixer la date du marriage je suggère "Now we just have to set the date for the wedding !!")
Lots of love Madie

Merci de votre aide

Laure

A part la dernière phrase c'était pas mal du tout !

Bon courage !!

lolo1111 · 05-07-2008, 01:04 PM

Hi,
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide et le "bon courage".

A bientôt sur le forum ?

Richnico · 05-07-2008, 01:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lolo1111

Hi,
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide et le "bon courage".

A bientôt sur le forum ?

Quand tu veux...je suis là presque tous les jours...

05-06-2008, 05:02 PM	#1 (permalink)
lolo1111 Growing Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: France Posts: 24 lolo1111 is an unknown character at this point	Quelqu'un peut-il m'aider à corriger mes fautes ? THANKS Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger les fautes d'orthographe ? Merci d'avance Le sujet : A few month later, the young woman writes to her wealthy parents about her decision to live with an improverished jazz musician? 15th April 2003 Dear Dad, dear Mum, It was kind of you to write to me. I' m very sorry I haven' t written for so long, but it happens a extraordinary thing ! I met a man. ( Mum, Do are you satisfies? It has been a long time that you want that I met somebody !) I met Peter in a jazz club in the Fulham Road. Peter was the pianist (Dad are you happy that he is a musician as you ?). The bar was rather gloomy ! As soon as I entered, I wanted to go out , but... Peter was here! He played piano, calmly. He was so elegant, so mysterious. I thought that we were made for each other. Whatever he made do, I was already in love with him ! When he took his break we spoke together,he comes from South East London, he lives in a small apartment. He admitted to me some week after that he wasn't a professional pianist. In the truth, he looked for a job. Some week later, he found a job. He is salesman in a butcher's. It has been 3 months since we see each other. Then I decided to live with him in my apartment to South Kensington. He accepted and will move in, in 2 weeks. He sold his apartment, and with his money we will make works in our apartment. We will buy a new sofa and we will paint the bed room in yellow. Peter is satisfied because I have a piano. Weeks pass and we both agree with each other! There's no fix the date of the marriage left... The Lot of love from Madie Merci de votre aide Laure
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lolo1111 Growing Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: France Posts: 24 lolo1111 is an unknown character at this point	Hi, Merci beaucoup pour votre aide et le "bon courage". A bientôt sur le forum ?
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