Neville78

Bonjour,

Pouvez vous me corriger ma traduction c'est pour un oral en anglais en classe de 1ère

Merci

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I am going to speak to you about my journeys that I so realized that the journeys which I would like to make.

I am going to speak to you first of all about my journey in Poland, which I realized approximately three years ago, in the city of Cracow one of the most important cities of Poland, this city is simply magnificent at the level of the architecture, since 1978 she(it) is classified heritage(holdings) world of the humanity by UNESCO. There are many of monumen. There are many monuments we can speak about saint's basilica about Marie built in XIV ème siecle of a Gothic style. There are also the appearances(mines) of Wieliczka who is the most former(ancient) saltmine of Europe. Of Europe there is a center of conference of more than one thousand places in 125m underground. Of more a church is built in hundred metres deep everything is in salt that it is about the ground, the staircases, the statues of paintings(boards), or still the chandeliers(lustrums); classified heritage(holdings) world of UNESCO in 1978. Numerous personalities visited this church Jean Paul II, George Bush … I also visited the extermination camps of Aushitsx Birkenau which remain a visit the most testing of my life, the horror of the inhumanity Nazi, people died for the madness of a man.

I also visited Budapest the capital of Hungary which is a beautiful country maybe less attractive at the level of the architecture but much warmer in term of human contact with regard to Poland or people are cold and distant, in more in Hungary many persons have French people notions, I keep(guard) a good memory(souvenir) of these two countries rather similar by their cultures..

There is still numerous countries which I would like to visit who(which) are especially on the American continent, the USA in particular New York which remains a dream a culture so different the megalomania. Argentina, Peru, Bolivia, and Mexico stay dreams, I cannot say to you why these countries attract(entice) me. All simply a dream

" The one who does not travel does not know the value of the men(people). " (Moorish proverb)

jierbe31

Bonjour,

I am going to tell you about the trips I have already done and those which I would like to do.

Let me tell you first of all about my trip to Poland. I did it approximately three years ago, in the city of Cracow one of the most important cities in Poland. This city is simply magnificent regarding architecture. Since 1978 it has been classified UNESCO World Heritage City. There are many monuments. Let me mention Saint Marie basilica built in the XIVth century in a Gothic style. There are also the mines of Wieliczka which are the most ancient saltmines in Europe. There is a conference centre which can seat more than one thousand 125m underground. Moreover a church is built a hundred metres deep. Everything is made of salt, either the ground, the staircases, the statues, the paintings, or still the chandeliers; classified UNESCO World Heritage Site in 1978. Numerous personalities visited this church such as John Paul IInd, George Bush … I also visited the extermination camps of Auschwitz-Birkenau which remain the most testing visit in my life: the horror of inhuman Nazis, people died because of the madness of one man.

I also visited Budapest, the capital of Hungary which is a beautiful country maybe less attractive regarding architecture but much warmer in terms of human contact. In comparison with Poland where people are cold and distant, many people in Hungary have some notions of the French language . I keep a good memory of these two countries rather similar by their cultures.

There are still numerous countries which I would like to visit especially on the American continent. The USA, in particular New York which remains a dream with a so different culture, its megalomania. Argentina, Peru, Bolivia, and Mexico stay dreams. I cannot tell you why these countries attract me. They are all simply a dream

" The one who does not travel does not know the value of the men(people). " (Moorish proverb)

* Avec toi au moins on ne s'ennuie pas !
Toutes les fautes à commettre, tu les commets sans faillir et pas des moindres...
Conseil d'ami : revois tes bases grammaticales sérieusement, faute de quoi tu cours droit au casse-pipes.

Neville78

Coucou,

Désolé du retard je voulais te remercier de ton aide, oui je vais essayer pourtant j'esseil mais sans résultats...

jierbe31

OK, c'est avec plaisir.
Personne ici ne m'en voudra si je te conseille de t'inscrire sur ce site et d'y travailler régulièrement.
C'est entièrement gratuit et ça fourmille de trucs et astuces, leçons, exercices, tests avec corrections, fiches méthodologiques, apprentissage amusant des verbes irréguliers, documents audios et vidéos, etc, j'en passe.
Tu peux te recommander de moi (jean31), je serai ton parrain. Mais pas celui de Corleone !
Bonne chance et, de temps en temps, tiens-moi au courant de tes progrès parce que tu vas en faire, c'est sûr.

Neville78

Merci beaucoup pour le liens vers ce site internet, je te tiens au courant

Merci encore