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This story took place during the cold war

“ A distinguee scientist Mr. TOPOLEIV joined us “ titled the Times few months before the
event , the article described how the famous scientist (known for his work during the WW2 about the post-combustion) achieved to run way to west …

Few months later Mr. TOPOLEIV was in the subway and just before his final station he felt a bite in his leg. He hadn’t the time to realized that he had been shouted by a strange man with an umbrella that he fallen strike down.

Mr. TOPOLEIV had been let down died by the man with the umbrella and the first thing is that Mr. TOPOLEIV had succumbed to a hearth attack.

But few days later newspapers expressed the possibility of a murder by a soviet-agent.

The investigation revealed that several eyewitnesses have seen a shady man with an umbrella inside the subway before the scientist’s death and they drown up an identikit.

The conclusion of the autopsy confirmed the argument of a murdered by poison, probably injected by a Bulgarian umbrella.

Three weeks later the duty officer in the police station received an anonymous call telling him to go to the corner of the five hundred and sixty Riverside and fifty-one streets.

Then the police discovered a dead body that seemed to have fallen in the staircase, the man was in fact the man who was wanted by the police about the scientist’s murder.

After the investigation the police couldn’t know if it was an accident or if somebody helped him to fall in the stairway like somebody helped Mr. TOPOLEIV to run way to west few months ago…

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This story took place during the cold war

“A distinguished scientist, Mr. Topoleiv, joined us" was headlined in the Times a few months before the event. The article described how the famous scientist (known for his work about post-combustion during WW2) succeeded in running away to the West …

Some months later Mr. Topoleiv was in the subway and just before his final station he felt a bite in his leg. He hadn’t the time to realized that he had been hit by a strange man with an umbrella when he fell down struck to death.

Mr. Topoleiv had been shot down dead by the man with the umbrella and the first thing is that Mr. Topoleiv had succumbed to a heart attack.(??)

But a few days later newspapers expressed the possibility of a murder by a soviet agent.

The investigation revealed that several eyewitnesses had seen a shadowy man with an umbrella inside the subway before the scientist’s death and they drew up an identikit picture.

The conclusion of the autopsy confirmed the argument of a murder by poison, probably injected by a Bulgarian umbrella.

Three weeks later the officer on duty in the police station received an anonymous call telling him to go to the corner of 560 Riverside and 51st streets.

Then the police discovered a dead body that seemed to have fallen in the staircase. The man was in fact the one who was wanted by the police about the scientist’s murder.

After the investigation the police couldn’t determine if it was an accident or if somebody helped him to fall in the stairway like somebody had helped Mr. Topoleiv to run away to the West a few months ago…



* Entre autres choses, tu sembles ignorer que seule l'initiale d'un nom propre prend la majuscule.