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In France, the number of infringements on the persons increased by 72 % since 1996. Such is the alarming report of the « Obersavatoire » of the crime. But what explain that ?

Nobody was able to escape the violence’s moose which increases in France. Every day in the newspaper or still in the television news, we confronted with this violence. Let us take for example the high school student who stabbed on Monday, March 5th his class teacher in Lyon. The incident occurred in class while the teacher evoked with school, 15-year-old and half, the eventuality of a redoubling in second. Or still, in a secondary school of Calais, a 19-year-old young man who was seriously damaged by a stab, worn by a 17-year-old pupil further to a quarrel about a damaged scooter.
But why so much dramas?? I think at present of the young people see only the violence to resolve the problem! The adolescence is an age where we try to be imperative, be accepted by the others. It is the age where we refute everything, where we consider invincible! By hurting or even by killing some people think of amazing the others, of showing that he is stronger than everything and that he is afraid of nothing. It can have dramas as it there also because the young people are not in them normal states. They are under the influence either of narcotics or alcohol. Or They are in lack (as we were able to see it in the text).

In conclusion, we live in a society which is given rhythm by the violence. Every day, in news items, we notice it. It is entirely up to us to prevent our circle of acquaintances to try to remedy this violence.