vanais

Bonjour!

je suis actuellement en DUT GEA à Lyon. Je souhaiterais l'an prochain partir étudier 1 an en Ecosse. J'ai rédigé mon CV et ma lettre de motivation en anglais, mais bien que mon niveau d'anglais soit plutôt bon pour une française, je reste française... Aussi si pouviez y jeter un coup d'oeil et me corriger, me donner des conseils notamment sur le contenu de la lettre, je vous en serais très reconnaissante.
Merci d'avance!

Anaïs

lettre de motivation :


Dear Sir or Madam,


I am willing to apply for a place as student in your University for the next school year.

Currently I am a student in the IUT A which belongs to the University of Lyons. I have been learning management for two years and by the end of this year I will obtain my diploma.

At the same time, I enjoy learning languages. I passed the First Certificate in English issued from the University of Cambridge four years ago. I also had the chance to visit some parts of Europe, such as Spain, the Netherlands, Germany and Great Britain.

Moreover, this would be the opportunity for me to discover the Scottish culture. I have been learning English for almost nine years but I still lack knowledge about the different cultures of the English-speaking countries. There are approximately only five years left before I finish my studies and I think it is time for me to deepen it at this stage of my school level. Besides in the context of globalization a school year abroad is not optional anymore, it is a necessity especially in careers related to management.

These are all the reasons why I permit myself to solicit you in order to appear among your students next year. As well as all the advantages your University will able to provide me, this collaboration will permit you to benefit from my seriousness and my skills.

I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely


CV :

QUALIFICATION

Since September, 2006 : DUT GEA in Lyons (two-year management course)
July, 2006 : Baccalauréat scientifique, section européenne (the equivalent of British A levels with special emphasis on sciences and languages)
June, 2004 : Passing of the First Certificate in English
September, 2003 - June, 2006 Studies at the International School of Lyon

WORK EXPERIENCE :

July - August, 2007 : Seasonal work in Chazay d’Azergues's town hall
December, 2002: One week work placement in a optician's (Chazay d’Azergues)
April, 2001 : One week work placement in a nursery school (Chazay d’Azergues)

SKILLS :

Languages : French : mother tongue
English : advanced
Spanish : good knowledge
German : basic knowledge
Computing : Mastery of office automation softwares : Word, Excel and Powerpoint

INTERESTS AND OTHER EXPERIENCES :

Other expériences :
Mathematics and English lessons, level : Secondary school, for 3 years
Humanitarian project in favour of a Moroccan school since April, 2007
Leisure :
Practise of theatre
French comedies

elizabeth 1

I would like to apply for a place as a student in your University for the next school year.

Currently I am a student in IUT A which is part of the University of Lyons. I have been studying management for two years and at the end of this year I will obtain my diplome
I enjoy learning languages. I have the First Certificate in English issued from the University of Cambridge four years ago. I also had the chance to visit some parts of Europe, such as Spain, the Netherlands, Germany and Great Britain.

I have been learning English for almost nine years but I still lack knowledge about the different cultures of the English-speaking countries. Moreover, this would be the opportunity for me to discover the Scottish culture.
I still have five years of study and I think it would be advantageous for me to study in Scotland. As well as all the advantages your University will able to provide to me, this collaboration will also permit you to benefit from my seriousness and my skills.

I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you.