Petite correction d'une compo d'anglais

bkd35 · 01-29-2008, 07:41 PM

Voici la composition d'anglais que j'ai dû réaliser sur les différences entre les appareils photos numériques et les appareilfs photos traditionnelle.

Avant de mettre tout cela au propre j'aimerai avoir votre avis sur la grammaire et l'orthographe :

Quote:

At first it’s important to remember that except capture pictures process, which is make by a sensor system on digital cameras or light exposure on the others, any component like zoom, design are almost similar on both.
The main difference between them is, of course, pictures storage. The traditional cameras print pictures on a film that you need to develop later if you want have paper pictures whereas digital devices which store picture on a small storage card where you can put more than three hundred pictures. Thanks to this system, pictures can be easily saved on a computer and they can be manage immediately on device if you want delete or rotate it. For me it’s really this which has made success of digital photography.
At a performance point of view, if you take the best traditional cameras you will have more beautiful pictures than digital cameras. It can be an asset for users who need high quality.
In few years, with digital cameras development which will permits us to have perfect photos like traditional photography, I think these last one will disappeared on the market or will stay on a really small quantity.

Merci à toutes les personnes qui aident sur ce forum très utile, et permettant d'avancer !

Bonne soirée

valter · 01-30-2008, 02:27 AM

At first (first of all) it’s important to remember that except capture pictures process, which is make (made) by a sensor system on digital cameras or light exposure on the others, (.) any component like zoom, design are almost similar on both. (Any others components, like zoom, the design are almost similiar on both.)

bkd35 · 01-30-2008, 03:57 PM

Merci Valter.

Le reste de la compo est-elle correct ?

bkd35 · 02-03-2008, 12:15 PM

Personne ?

Merci

Richnico · 02-06-2008, 12:13 PM

It’s important to remember that other than the capture pictures process, which is made by a sensor system on digital cameras and by light exposure on other types of camera, the design of any component like zoom is almost the same on both.The main difference between them is, of course, picture storage. The traditional cameras print pictures on a film which needs to be developed later if you want have paper pictures, whereas digital devices store pictures on a small storage card which can hold more than three hundred pictures. Thanks to this system, pictures can be easily saved on a computer and from there immediately altered or deleted. For me it’s really this which has made a success of digital photography.
From a performance point of view, if you use the best traditional cameras you will have more beautiful pictures than with a digital camera and are better suited for users who need high quality pictures.
In a few years, digital camera development will permit us to have perfect photos like traditional photography, which I think will disappear from the market or will continue to exist only in very small quantities.

Hope this helps..........

bkd35 · 02-07-2008, 04:54 PM

Merci pour ton aide

Je vais analyser tes corrections avec ma compo d'origine.

Bonne soirée

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valter Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 8 valter is an unknown character at this point	At first (first of all) it’s important to remember that except capture pictures process, which is make (made) by a sensor system on digital cameras or light exposure on the others, (.) any component like zoom, design are almost similar on both. (Any others components, like zoom, the design are almost similiar on both.)
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bkd35 Growing Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 13 bkd35 is an unknown character at this point	Merci Valter. Le reste de la compo est-elle correct ?
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bkd35 Growing Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 13 bkd35 is an unknown character at this point	Personne ? Merci
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Richnico Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Paris, France Posts: 181 Richnico has a spectacular aura about	It’s important to remember that other than the capture pictures process, which is made by a sensor system on digital cameras and by light exposure on other types of camera, the design of any component like zoom is almost the same on both.The main difference between them is, of course, picture storage. The traditional cameras print pictures on a film which needs to be developed later if you want have paper pictures, whereas digital devices store pictures on a small storage card which can hold more than three hundred pictures. Thanks to this system, pictures can be easily saved on a computer and from there immediately altered or deleted. For me it’s really this which has made a success of digital photography. From a performance point of view, if you use the best traditional cameras you will have more beautiful pictures than with a digital camera and are better suited for users who need high quality pictures. In a few years, digital camera development will permit us to have perfect photos like traditional photography, which I think will disappear from the market or will continue to exist only in very small quantities. Hope this helps.......... Last edited by Richnico; 02-06-2008 at 12:15 PM.
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bkd35 Growing Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 13 bkd35 is an unknown character at this point	Merci pour ton aide Je vais analyser tes corrections avec ma compo d'origine. Bonne soirée
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