lielie

Bonjour,
on m'a demandé un résumé du chapitre 22 du livre never let me go de Kazuo Ishiguro.J'aimerais un peu d'aide pour la correction de ce texte car je vois bien qu'il y'a des phrases qui collent pas mais je n'arrive pas à les tourner différemment.
et en même temps j'aimerais savoir s'il faut obligatoirement écrire un résumé au prétérit ou si on peut le faire au présent aussi parce que ça semble un peu étrange parfois d'être au prétérit (ex:la dernière phrase)

Tommy and Kathy visited Madame where they met their old headmistress miss Lucy to know if the rumor of having a deferral for couples in love is true. After denying it, Miss Lucy decided to disclose the truth about Hailsham: They learned that they were only clones and that their artistic productions which had always been emphasized at Hailsham were used by the teachers as a proof to show that clones had souls. They also learned that Hailsham was an opportunity for them to have an education, to improve conditions of living of clones before donating. But people prefered to view them merely as non-human sources of organs, and wanted them to be “back in the shadows”. Consequently Hailsham had to closed, being left by his sponsors. Even if they tried not to show their disappointment, these revelations let them deeply shocked. Once they had left, Kathy and Tommy understood that all their hopes had vanished and they were back confronted to the reality of their censeless existence, alone.

Bonne journée et merci d'avance