Aide en anglais

be saida · 12-30-2007, 02:30 PM

Bonjours, mon anglais n'est pas térrible et je dois écrire une lettre, je l'ai écrite mais je pense qu'elle est pleine de fautes alors pourriez vous m'aider s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance, vous me sauvez!

My dear friends,

As you know, I went a week ago to the place where I was born.I found it but I was suprised to see that it had changed a lot. In fact, the town is no longer the same, is no longer like I told you but it is a little bit like you told me, it is full of ghosts. Yes, I was a little bit sad to see it. However it still the district of my childhood, I have spend so much time in its streets, I have been loved there, I have been educated there. The list is so long. So even if the town had changed, it helps me to remenber this time of happyness
My return was planned for yesterday so I went to the airport but I didn't take my plane as I told you yerderday at the phone.You know that I am an old man and I feel me like attracted by this place.
So I stay here but not for one or two days, it's for the rest of my life. I love you but I have found here, like I said, feelings so deep which make me feel young and gives me the force and the envie of staying here. I have also met poeple so adorable who knew my familly and day after day I find others who knew me .
I can't tell you how much I am happy. It will be hard without you but I will come every month and I hope that you will come to visit England and blackburn.
Fear for me does not have, be just happy for me. I will come very soon to visit you.
I miss you already, be happy and benefit from the life.

Your faithful friend, who love you.

jierbe31 · 12-30-2007, 04:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by be saida

Bonjours, mon anglais n'est pas térrible et je dois écrire une lettre, je l'ai écrite mais je pense qu'elle est pleine de fautes alors pourriez vous m'aider s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance, vous me sauvez!

My dear friends,

As you know, I went a week ago to the place where I was born.I found it but I was suprised to see that it had changed a lot. In fact, the town is no longer the same, is no longer like I told you but it is a little bit like you told me, it is full of ghosts. Yes, I was a little bit sad to see it. However it still the district of my childhood, I have spend so much time in its streets, I have been loved there, I have been educated there. The list is so long. So even if the town had changed, it helps me to remenber this time of happyness
My return was planned for yesterday so I went to the airport but I didn't take my plane as I told you yerderday at the phone.You know that I am an old man and I feel me like attracted by this place.
So I stay here but not for one or two days, it's for the rest of my life. I love you but I have found here, like I said, feelings so deep which make me feel young and gives me the force and the envie of staying here. I have also met poeple so adorable who knew my familly and day after day I find others who knew me .
I can't tell you how much I am happy. It will be hard without you but I will come every month and I hope that you will come to visit England and blackburn.
Fear for me does not have, be just happy for me. I will come very soon to visit you.
I miss you already, be happy and benefit from the life.

Your faithful friend, who love you.

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be saida · 12-30-2007, 07:28 PM

On se retrouve, j'aurais aimé avoir plusieur avis mais vous semblez bien vous y connaitre, vous etes peut etre professeur.
A bientôt.

jierbe31 · 12-31-2007, 10:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by be saida

On se retrouve, j'aurais aimé avoir plusieur avis mais vous semblez bien vous y connaitre, vous etes peut etre professeur.
A bientôt.

Merci pour ta confiance...

12-30-2007, 02:30 PM	#1 (permalink)
be saida Growing Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 14 be saida is an unknown character at this point	Aide en anglais Bonjours, mon anglais n'est pas térrible et je dois écrire une lettre, je l'ai écrite mais je pense qu'elle est pleine de fautes alors pourriez vous m'aider s'il vous plait. Merci d'avance, vous me sauvez! My dear friends, As you know, I went a week ago to the place where I was born.I found it but I was suprised to see that it had changed a lot. In fact, the town is no longer the same, is no longer like I told you but it is a little bit like you told me, it is full of ghosts. Yes, I was a little bit sad to see it. However it still the district of my childhood, I have spend so much time in its streets, I have been loved there, I have been educated there. The list is so long. So even if the town had changed, it helps me to remenber this time of happyness My return was planned for yesterday so I went to the airport but I didn't take my plane as I told you yerderday at the phone.You know that I am an old man and I feel me like attracted by this place. So I stay here but not for one or two days, it's for the rest of my life. I love you but I have found here, like I said, feelings so deep which make me feel young and gives me the force and the envie of staying here. I have also met poeple so adorable who knew my familly and day after day I find others who knew me . I can't tell you how much I am happy. It will be hard without you but I will come every month and I hope that you will come to visit England and blackburn. Fear for me does not have, be just happy for me. I will come very soon to visit you. I miss you already, be happy and benefit from the life. Your faithful friend, who love you.
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12-30-2007, 07:28 PM	#3 (permalink)
be saida Growing Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 14 be saida is an unknown character at this point	merci encore On se retrouve, j'aurais aimé avoir plusieur avis mais vous semblez bien vous y connaitre, vous etes peut etre professeur. A bientôt.
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