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Le but des premiers journaux était de donner les informations les plus correctes sur les sujets les plus intéressants. Puis les journaux devinrent plus grands, et la publicité plus importante. Ils eurent d'autant plus de lecteurs que leur tirage augmentait. Ils durent créer des évènements d'autant plus passionnants. Les meilleurs des journalistes étaient des explorateurs. Au fur et à mesure que le gouvernement devenait plus puissant les bons journalistes devenaient plus puissants aussi. Mais que pourrions-nous dire des pires ?

ma traduction:

The objective was the first newspaper to provide the most accurate information on the most interesting. Then newspapers became larger and larger advertising. They had more players that their circulation increased. They had to create events all the more exciting. The best journalists were explorers. As the government became more powerful good journalists became more powerful as well. But what could we say the worst?

banane82

The first newspapers purpose/aim ( met celui que tu veux ) was broadcasting the truthest news about the most inetresting subjects; then, newspapers grew, and advertising took more and more space. They had as many readers as their production increased. They had to create events more and more captivating. The best journalists were explorers. As the government goes along more powerful, good journalists became more powerful as well. But what can we say about the worsts ?

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elizabeth 1

The objective of the first newspapers was to provide the most accurate information on the most interesting subjects. Newspapers became bigger and bigger and advertising more important. They had more readers than newspapers printed, circulation increased. They had to create events more and more exciting. The best journalists were explorers. As the government became more powerful the best journalists also became more powerful. But what can we say for the worst? (journalists)

Lina

En reprenant en partie la traduction d'Elisabeth1 :

The objective of the first newspapers was to provide the most accurate information on the most interesting subjects. Then newspapers became bigger and bigger and advertising more important. They had all the more readers since circulation increased. They had to create events all the more exciting. The best journalists were explorers. The more powerful the government became, the more powerful the best journalists became too.. But what could we say of the worst? (journalists)

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elizabeth 1

One should never start a sentence with THEN
vous avez appris l'anglais ou?

What can we say for the worst. It is a fact and a fact that still exists today.

J"ai traduit sense pour sense en n"est pas obligé de traduire mots a mots

Lina

A l'école, comme beaucoup de gens et on ne m'avait jamais dit cela. Comme quoi, on en apprend tous les jours et à tous les âges, quel que soit son niveau d'études.

Je ne voulais pas vous blesser en donnant l'impression de corriger votre traduction. Je l'ai juste prise pour base parce que je la trouvais plutôt bonne, même si je n'aurais pas formulé certains passages de cette manière.

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anarvorig

En fait j'étais un peu étonné de la très grande différence entre les traductions de "banane1er" et "elizabeth82"

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