Could someone here correct my CV written in english ?

valdo · 02-08-2004, 02:07 PM

Hello,
I need help...

- Mr Laurent Jacques Valdes
- Born in Toulouse, on 27 April ,1981
- Live currently at Toulouse, Cité Universitaire de Rangueil
- Private phone: +33 6 11 25 33 90

1998 Scientific studies at Notre Dame of Garaison (Biology Option,Mathematics Speciality)
1999-2000 Engineer preparation at PTSI Déodat de Séverac (Physics, Technology and Ingeneer Sciences)
2000-2002 DEUG MIAS Paul Sabatier University(Mathematics, Computer Science and their Applications to sciences)
2003-2004 Computer Science Licence at Paul Sabatier University

1998 Scientific studies at Notre Dame of Garaison (Biology Option,Mathematics Speciality)
1999-2000 Engineer preparation at PTSI Déodat de Séverac (Physics, Technology and Ingeneer Sciences)
2000-2002 DEUG MIAS Paul Sabatier University(Mathematics, Computer Science and their Applications to sciences)
2003-2004 Computer Science Licence at Paul Sabatier University

Experiences
- Educational Organiser for Youngs and Culture House of a little french town called l'Isle en Dodon, for French Scouts, and finally for School-Associated Leisure Center of Lasserre, an other french town.
- Sales assistant and presentator at City One, SEP Sales & promotions, Defimedia (both are Paris firms) as well at the Lège Cap Ferret tourism office, where I was also affiliated to Atlantic Littoral Conservatory Guards.
- President, Animator, Responsible for an association called ARUR (Rangueil University Residents Association) (400 persons), and also for the FARCUT, which is the federation of those kind of organization, in the city of Toulouse.
- Secretary of the Poneychinelle association, whose aim is to learn childrens to ride poneys.
-Contributing member of the organization HyperPomme Sud Ouest, which is an Apple User Group.

Sports and cultural interests:
•Horse riding
•Theater
•French Scouts http://www.eedf.asso.fr
•ARUR: Poterry, Aerobic http://www.arur.org
•Web Site: http://valdo.cineteck-fr.com (type "laurent valdes" into Google)

Anglofrance · 02-15-2004, 05:02 PM

Hi there,

No problem!

I will just list the corrections I would make.

:arrow: - Live currently at Toulouse, Cité Universitaire de Rangueil
:D Currently living in Toulouse..........

:arrow: Experiences
:D Experience

:arrow: Educational Organiser for Youngs and Culture House of a little french town called l'Isle en Dodon, for French Scouts, and finally for School-Associated Leisure Center of Lasserre, an other french town.
:D an other = another

:arrow: which is the federation of those kind of organization, in the city of Toulouse.
:D organization = organisations

:arrow: Secretary of the Poneychinelle association, whose aim is to learn childrens to ride poneys.
:D .... whose aim is to teach children to ride ponies.

:arrow: Theater
:D Theatre

I hope this helps you out !

Regards
Linda

anish · 11-10-2004, 05:49 AM

hi laurent,

After linda, i would also suggest:

1999-2000 Engineer preparation at PTSI Déodat de Séverac (Physics, Technology and Ingeneer Sciences)
Ingeneer Sciences = Engineering Sciences

- Sales assistant and presentator at City One, SEP Sales & promotions, Defimedia (both are Paris firms) as well at the Lège Cap Ferret tourism office, where I was also affiliated to Atlantic Littoral Conservatory Guards.
presentator = representative (?)

President, Animator, Responsible for an association called ARUR (Rangueil University Residents Association) (400 persons), and also for the FARCUT, which is the federation of those kind of organization, in the city of Toulouse.
"the FARCUT- a federation of similar organizations in the city of Toulouse."

•ARUR: Poterry, Aerobic http://www.arur.org
Poterry = Pottery
Aerobic = Aerobics

best wishes,
-anish

femuse · 11-10-2004, 04:59 PM

Quote:

.. I was also affiliated to

affiliated with

Theater vs Theatre: it shows you are from England :D (Theater is used in the States)

sandorm · 11-10-2004, 05:24 PM

- Educational Organiser for Youth and Cultural Centre of a little French town called l'Isle en Dodon, for French Scouts, and ...another French town.

LOCONNOR · 11-12-2004, 11:38 AM

Work experience, pas experience

LOCONNOR · 11-12-2004, 11:43 AM

Ignore that, experience is better, as it is not all work experience.xx

Il faut decider si tu l'envoyeras aux etats unis ou angleterre, parce qu'il existe des differences entre les deux langues, bien qu'on comprenne tous les deux. Je ne serais contente de recevoir un cv en americain.

02-08-2004, 02:07 PM	#1 (permalink)
valdo Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Toulouse Posts: 36 valdo is an unknown character at this point	Hello, I need help... - Mr Laurent Jacques Valdes - Born in Toulouse, on 27 April ,1981 - Live currently at Toulouse, Cité Universitaire de Rangueil - Private phone: +33 6 11 25 33 90 1998 Scientific studies at Notre Dame of Garaison (Biology Option,Mathematics Speciality) 1999-2000 Engineer preparation at PTSI Déodat de Séverac (Physics, Technology and Ingeneer Sciences) 2000-2002 DEUG MIAS Paul Sabatier University(Mathematics, Computer Science and their Applications to sciences) 2003-2004 Computer Science Licence at Paul Sabatier University 1998 Scientific studies at Notre Dame of Garaison (Biology Option,Mathematics Speciality) 1999-2000 Engineer preparation at PTSI Déodat de Séverac (Physics, Technology and Ingeneer Sciences) 2000-2002 DEUG MIAS Paul Sabatier University(Mathematics, Computer Science and their Applications to sciences) 2003-2004 Computer Science Licence at Paul Sabatier University Experiences - Educational Organiser for Youngs and Culture House of a little french town called l'Isle en Dodon, for French Scouts, and finally for School-Associated Leisure Center of Lasserre, an other french town. - Sales assistant and presentator at City One, SEP Sales & promotions, Defimedia (both are Paris firms) as well at the Lège Cap Ferret tourism office, where I was also affiliated to Atlantic Littoral Conservatory Guards. - President, Animator, Responsible for an association called ARUR (Rangueil University Residents Association) (400 persons), and also for the FARCUT, which is the federation of those kind of organization, in the city of Toulouse. - Secretary of the Poneychinelle association, whose aim is to learn childrens to ride poneys. -Contributing member of the organization HyperPomme Sud Ouest, which is an Apple User Group. Sports and cultural interests: •Horse riding •Theater •French Scouts http://www.eedf.asso.fr •ARUR: Poterry, Aerobic http://www.arur.org •Web Site: http://valdo.cineteck-fr.com (type "laurent valdes" into Google)
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02-15-2004, 05:02 PM	#2 (permalink)
Anglofrance Junior Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: England Posts: 4 Anglofrance is an unknown character at this point	Hi there, No problem! I will just list the corrections I would make. :arrow: - Live currently at Toulouse, Cité Universitaire de Rangueil :D Currently living in Toulouse.......... :arrow: Experiences :D Experience :arrow: Educational Organiser for Youngs and Culture House of a little french town called l'Isle en Dodon, for French Scouts, and finally for School-Associated Leisure Center of Lasserre, an other french town. :D an other = another :arrow: which is the federation of those kind of organization, in the city of Toulouse. :D organization = organisations :arrow: Secretary of the Poneychinelle association, whose aim is to learn childrens to ride poneys. :D .... whose aim is to teach children to ride ponies. :arrow: Theater :D Theatre I hope this helps you out ! Regards Linda
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11-10-2004, 05:49 AM	#3 (permalink)
anish Junior Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: boston ma Posts: 6 anish is an unknown character at this point	hi laurent, After linda, i would also suggest: 1999-2000 Engineer preparation at PTSI Déodat de Séverac (Physics, Technology and Ingeneer Sciences) Ingeneer Sciences = Engineering Sciences - Sales assistant and presentator at City One, SEP Sales & promotions, Defimedia (both are Paris firms) as well at the Lège Cap Ferret tourism office, where I was also affiliated to Atlantic Littoral Conservatory Guards. presentator = representative (?) President, Animator, Responsible for an association called ARUR (Rangueil University Residents Association) (400 persons), and also for the FARCUT, which is the federation of those kind of organization, in the city of Toulouse. "the FARCUT- a federation of similar organizations in the city of Toulouse." •ARUR: Poterry, Aerobic http://www.arur.org Poterry = Pottery Aerobic = Aerobics best wishes, -anish Last edited by anish; 11-10-2004 at 05:51 AM.
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11-10-2004, 05:24 PM	#5 (permalink)
sandorm Junior Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Brussels Posts: 21 sandorm is an unknown character at this point	one more - Educational Organiser for Youth and Cultural Centre of a little French town called l'Isle en Dodon, for French Scouts, and ...another French town. __________________ Monica
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11-12-2004, 11:38 AM	#6 (permalink)
LOCONNOR Senior International Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: UK Posts: 107 LOCONNOR is an unknown character at this point	Work experience, pas experience
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11-12-2004, 11:43 AM	#7 (permalink)
LOCONNOR Senior International Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: UK Posts: 107 LOCONNOR is an unknown character at this point	Ignore that, experience is better, as it is not all work experience.xx Il faut decider si tu l'envoyeras aux etats unis ou angleterre, parce qu'il existe des differences entre les deux langues, bien qu'on comprenne tous les deux. Je ne serais contente de recevoir un cv en americain.
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