Correction d'un petit texte anglais

Lorent · 10-05-2007, 04:47 PM

Bonjour,

J'ai fais ce petit texte en anglais, Quelqu'un peut-il le corriger ?

D'avance merci.

Last time we spoke about a text which deals with a new alternative of sentences for several type of crime like pilferer, murderer, wife-beater and drug-buyer. This new sentences is based on shame and people who are offenders must pace in the street with a sandwich board. We can read: “I am a thief”.

jierbe31 · 10-05-2007, 05:49 PM

Bonsoir,

Last time we spoke about a text which deals with a new alternative of sentences for several types of criminals like pilferer, murderer, wife-beater and drug-buyer. These new sentences are based on shame and people who are offenders must pace in the street with a sandwich board. We can read: “I am a thief”.

Lorent · 10-06-2007, 08:16 AM

Merci beaucoup de votre correction. C'est vrai que le this et there ... c'est pas encore au point.

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Lorent Growing Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 12 Lorent is an unknown character at this point	Correction d'un petit texte anglais Bonjour, J'ai fais ce petit texte en anglais, Quelqu'un peut-il le corriger ? D'avance merci. Last time we spoke about a text which deals with a new alternative of sentences for several type of crime like pilferer, murderer, wife-beater and drug-buyer. This new sentences is based on shame and people who are offenders must pace in the street with a sandwich board. We can read: “I am a thief”.
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jierbe31 International Forum Great Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Midi-Pyrénées France Posts: 1,010 Blog Entries: 2 jierbe31 is on a distinguished road	Bonsoir, Last time we spoke about a text which deals with a new alternative of sentences for several types of criminals like pilferer, murderer, wife-beater and drug-buyer. These new sentences are based on shame and people who are offenders must pace in the street with a sandwich board. We can read: “I am a thief”.
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10-06-2007, 08:16 AM	#3 (permalink)
Lorent Growing Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 12 Lorent is an unknown character at this point	Merci beaucoup de votre correction. C'est vrai que le this et there ... c'est pas encore au point.
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