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Location: vannes, morbihan, france
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Correction I.3 - cecyl, the little britain poet
Hi
I'm french Can you help me to correct my poetries of my compendium "yahve" (url of my blog in my profile) The poem that goes, is it right or wrong ? I.3 _ LOW-KEY An amber heart An incense body Guard my soul To the throes of time Winds get up Booms the sea Wasted by dreams Goes out the sunshine cecyl, the little britain poet Please, Reply "OK" if no mistake I want to post it to a US forum of poetry Last edited by cecyl; 09-27-2007 at 02:12 PM. |
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