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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: vannes, morbihan, france
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Correction I.2 - cecyl, the little britain poet
Hi
I'm french Can you help me to correct my poetries of my compendium "yahve" (url of my blog in my profile) The poem that goes, is it right or wrong ? I.2 _ CRACK OF DAWN To live like a leaf Blown by the wind Twirling & light Under the sun's setting Caught by the sea, & all its silvery billows It offers its soul To this blue & white star cecyl, the little britain poet Please, Reply "OK" if no mistake I want to post it to a US forum of poetry Last edited by cecyl; 09-27-2007 at 02:12 PM. |
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