Correction Λ - cecyl, the little britain poet

cecyl · 09-26-2007, 07:15 PM

Hi

I'm french
Can you help me to correct my poetries
of my compendium "yahve" (on my blog)
The poem that goes, is it right or wrong ?

Λ. GOD'S SPEAKING TO US

An ocean without storm, Is there
An eternal & sinful life, Is there
A soul in every creature, Is there
A love beyond real, Is there
An all universal poetry, Is there
An hard spiritual way, Is there
An all-present & lurking god, Is there

cecyl, the little britain poet

born2.bfree777 · 09-26-2007, 08:03 PM

Hi do you still want a correction? I can help.

born2.bfree777 · 09-26-2007, 08:22 PM

For example it has to go "an ocean without a storm, Is there" or "Oceans witout storms, Are there?" If it's one ocean it's is and if many it's are.

born2.bfree777 · 09-26-2007, 08:23 PM

By the way I like you poem.

cecyl · 09-26-2007, 08:34 PM

thanks

I have corrected my poem

Now I can post it to a US poetry forum

cecyl

born2.bfree777 · 09-26-2007, 08:56 PM

Listen, if you need my help with checking your poems write at olenam@laposte.fr
will be glad to help.

born2.bfree777 · 09-26-2007, 08:58 PM

If you have more that is.

09-26-2007, 07:15 PM	#1 (permalink)
cecyl love nature spirituality Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: vannes, morbihan, france Posts: 7 cecyl is an unknown character at this point	Correction Λ - cecyl, the little britain poet Hi I'm french Can you help me to correct my poetries of my compendium "yahve" (on my blog) The poem that goes, is it right or wrong ? Λ. GOD'S SPEAKING TO US An ocean without storm, Is there An eternal & sinful life, Is there A soul in every creature, Is there A love beyond real, Is there An all universal poetry, Is there An hard spiritual way, Is there An all-present & lurking god, Is there cecyl, the little britain poet Last edited by cecyl; 09-26-2007 at 08:31 PM.
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09-26-2007, 08:03 PM	#2 (permalink)
born2.bfree777 a candle Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: South of France Posts: 61 born2.bfree777 is an unknown character at this point	Hi do you still want a correction? I can help.
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09-26-2007, 08:22 PM	#3 (permalink)
born2.bfree777 a candle Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: South of France Posts: 61 born2.bfree777 is an unknown character at this point	For example it has to go "an ocean without a storm, Is there" or "Oceans witout storms, Are there?" If it's one ocean it's is and if many it's are.
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09-26-2007, 08:23 PM	#4 (permalink)
born2.bfree777 a candle Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: South of France Posts: 61 born2.bfree777 is an unknown character at this point	By the way I like you poem.
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09-26-2007, 08:34 PM	#5 (permalink)
cecyl love nature spirituality Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: vannes, morbihan, france Posts: 7 cecyl is an unknown character at this point	thanks I have corrected my poem Now I can post it to a US poetry forum cecyl
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09-26-2007, 08:56 PM	#6 (permalink)
born2.bfree777 a candle Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: South of France Posts: 61 born2.bfree777 is an unknown character at this point	Listen, if you need my help with checking your poems write at olenam@laposte.fr will be glad to help.
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09-26-2007, 08:58 PM	#7 (permalink)
born2.bfree777 a candle Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: South of France Posts: 61 born2.bfree777 is an unknown character at this point	If you have more that is.
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