09-26-2007, 03:43 PM
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Correction I.1 - cecyl, the little britain poet
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I'm french Can you help me to correct my poetries of "yahve" My next poem, is it right or wrong ? I.1 _ SWEETNESS & SUMMERTIME Sky sweats a clear blue heaven A light breeze slides on the sea Fragile waves caresses my feet On the sand, Gleam golden cowry To the Sun, I recite Verlaine's poetries Air is warm without choking Summer, In Little Britain, Reveals A wonderful & nice nature cecyl, the little britain poet Last edited by cecyl; 09-26-2007 at 04:32 PM. |
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09-26-2007, 04:58 PM
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I.1 _ SWEETNESS & SUMMERTIME
Sky sweats a clear blue heaven A light breeze slides on the sea Fragile waves caress my feet On the sand, Gleam golden cowry To the Sun, I recite Verlaine's poetries Air is warm without choking Summer, In Brittany, Reveals => ("Little Britain" doesn't exist as such, except maybe in a poet's inspiration born in Brittany?) A wonderful & nice nature cecyl, the poet from Brittany => (see above) Good job anyway.  |
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09-26-2007, 05:11 PM
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merci beaucoup
en faite, j'ai envoyé mon poème sur un site US de poésie où je demandais de corriger mes fautes l'administarteur n'était pas très content en me précisant qu'il y avait des fautes je suis donc venu jusqu'ici pour être sûr que mon poéme est présentable pour ce qui est de "la petite bretagne" c'est un jeu de mot avec "great britain" dans le roman du roi arthur la bretagne s'appelle la petite bretagne encore merci cecyl |
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