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Old 01-27-2005, 12:19 PM   #1 (permalink)
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pouvez-vous faire la vérification grammaticale de ces phrases. Merci

On our next trip we will go to the beach.
The bus will leave at 7.30 a.m.
We won't wait the latecomers.
We will stop for breakfast at 8.30.
We will arrive at seaside at 9.30.
We will go for walk along the beach first.
Then we will play game of beach volley.
We won't have a lunch restaurant.
We will have a picnic on the beach.
At the afternoon we will go swimming.
We will get on the bus at 6.30.
We won't stop on way home.
The bus will arrive clubhouse at 8 p.m.
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Ces phrases sont pour la plupart bien ecrites, mais voici quelques petites revisions:

On our next trip we will go to the beach.
The bus will leave at 7.30 a.m.
We won't wait for the latecomers.
We will stop for breakfast at 8.30.
We will arrive at the seaside at 9.30.
We will go for a walk along the beach first.
Then we will play a game of beach volleyball.
We won't have lunch at a restaurant.
We will have a picnic on the beach.
In the afternoon we will go swimming.
We will get on the bus at 6.30.
We won't stop on way home.
The bus will arrive at the clubhouse at 8 p.m.
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