06-07-2007, 12:21 PM
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Is it correct, please!
Hello!
Are my small lyrics correct, please! Thank you very much beforhand! Here it is: Fly, blowing by the wind When the sun goes down on plain Mignight sky on blue it seems Endless joy feels me inside Steppe’s horses runing wild. Run from tis land of cold To the clowds of gold Your faith dry the tears of haert in down Hundred miles out of your town Runing so fast and so strong Wild horses ride beyond! |
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06-09-2007, 07:17 PM
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Hi jenshen,
Some suggestions, but as always it would be better if an English speaker had a look!  Fly, blown by the wind When the sun goes down on the plain Midnight sky all blue it seems (? I wasn't sure what you meant) Endless joy fils me (inside) Steppe horses running wild Run from this land of cold To the clouds of gold Your faith dries the tears of the heart (I'm not sure what you meant there, sorry) Hundreds of miles away from your town Running so fast and so strong Wild horses riding beyond / along? |
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