Originally Posted by Jenshen

Hello everyone,
I would like to ask if my small poeme in english is correct.

Thanks a lot beforhand!

Here it is:

Am I stranger to jazz?
Sitting on the banc, - bank
Walking on the street,
Smyling by myself and always thinking - smiling
(About) so strange feeling this music gives me, for sure!
Rhythm, joy, soul’s extas
You’re welcome to the land of Jazz.

Jazz in Tokyo, Jazz in Kiev,
Jazz in London or in Negev,
Jazz in Moscow, Jazz in Benjin - do you mean Bejin? like in China?
Everywhere the swing is engin.

Am I stranger to Jazz?
They could ask you:”Are you strong - left out question mark (?)
To play and exploise your scat in all those tones”? - exploit
Darling, do you feel the freedom - left out question mark (?)
That this music gives you out? - give not gives
Leaving east, west,north or south - all should be Capitols at beginning
Play it, swing it, sing it out!