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Bonjours à tous. Voila j'ai une rédaction à faire pour demain en anglais mais je suis pas très bon. Voici ce que j'ai fait. Pouvez vous me dire si ça va et me corrigez mes fautes. Pouvez aussi me modifier les phrases afin qu'elles donnent l'impression d'être écrites par un vrai anglais et non une traduction mot à mot comme mon truc doit faire. Merci d'avance à tous.
Voici mon essai :

Personally, I think that to be a good employee, it's necessary to have some qualities. First of all, the most important quality, is to be serious, that means that when the owner asks us to carry a task, one must do it best than one can, while being conscientious.
Another paramount quality is to be specific. For example, if the day with 8:00am is begun and well one should not arrive at 8:10am, but to be to start there to work startinf from 8:00am.
For me, they are these two qualities most important to have to be to regard as a good employee. But the fact of being available towards the others can also form part of essential qualities. By available towards the others, I want to say that if ever a colleague with a problem and that one can help it, and well it should be done. It is necessary to be obliging in its work, and if the work of his colleagues is respected, they will make some in the same way. And thus one will be able to better work more quickly and.

Merci d'avance.

Jessierugg

Personally, I think that to be a good employee, it's necessary to have some qualities. First of all, the most important quality is to be serious. This means that when the owner assigns a task, one must do it the best that one can, while being conscientious.
Another important quality is to be punctual. For example, if the day begins at 8:00am, one should not arrive at 8:10am, but be there to work starting at 8:00am.
For me, these are the two most important qualities of a good employee. But being available towards others can also form part of essential qualities. By available towards others, I mean that if ever one can help a colleague with a problem one should do so. It is necessary to be obliging, and if one respects the work of his collleagues, they will do the same. And thus one will be better able to work more quickly.