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Old 05-14-2007, 12:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Bonjour,

J'aurai aimé avoir comment on traduisait cette phrase:

Pourriez vous complèter svp les documents joint ou nous envoyer une fiche technique propre à votre entreprise

->Would you please fill the documents enclosed or send a technical document of your firm ?

Merci d'avance

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good translation to me, could be slighly changed into:

Would you please fill the documents enclosed or send us a technical document concerning your firm/company ?
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Une autre petite phrase :

Pourriez vous svp me confirmer la réception / lecture de ce mail ?
Je reste à votre disposition pour toute question de votre part.

=> Would you please confirm the reading of this email ?
I will gladly provide any additional questions.

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Pourriez vous svp me confirmer la réception / lecture de ce mail ?
Je reste à votre disposition pour toute question de votre part.

=> Would you please confirm the reading of this email ?
I will gladly provide any additional questions.
Merci
how about:

Would you please confirm reception of this email
I will gladly provide any additional information
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how about:

Would you please confirm reception of this email
I will gladly provide any additional information
Moi je dirais plutôt "receipt": "reception" devrait signifier la façon dont on reçoit quelqu'un ou quelque chose (mais il est possible que dans certains dialectes la différence se soit effacée). "Confirm receipt" est peut-être plus fréquent aujourd'hui que "acknowledge receipt", la formule utilisée normalement dans les lettres commerciales avant l'ère du courrier électronique.

Pour la deuxième phrase, de nombreuses formulations sont possibles. Celle que tu as donnée est bonne. Quand je travaillais dans le commerce j'avais l'habitude de finir une lettre par "If you would like any further information please do not hesitate to ask". Mais les variations sont infinies...
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Thanks The Fd and Mikel for translations !!
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