alice32460

Bonjour, est ce que quelqu'un pourrais vérifier un peu ce que j'ai écrit :

I) The factory

I did work placement in Sopal, in a factory of paper transformation.
In a factory is located at Dax in Landes.
During my work placement I placed in the boarding school of a college and all morning I went on foot at Sopal.
Work placement during eight weeks ; four weeks to 27/11/2006 at 22/12/2006 and 08/01/2007 at 02/02/2007.

II) The staff

The factory count approximately 250 peoples.
At laboratory I was working on my own however. I am a good report with staff ; they were kind and very helpful, they did not left out.
The relationship between management and workers were cold, there were strikes during my first period work placement.
I felt good during my wok placement, they were put at ease and confident.

Merci à tous

alice32460

Voilà ce que je voulais marquer :

J’ai fais mon stage à la SOPAL, une usine de transformation de papier. Elle est situé à Dax dans les Landes. Pendant mon stage je logeais dans un internat d’un lycée, tous les matins je m’y rendais à pieds. Le stage à durée 8 semaines.

L’entreprise compte environ 250 personnes. Au laboratoire je travaillais seul cependant je me suis bien entendu avec le personnel, ils étaient pour la plupart aimable et très serviable, ils ne m’ont pas laissé de côté. Les rapports entre le personnel et la direction sont assez froid, il y a même eu grève pendant ma première période de stage. Je me suis bien sentie durant le stage, il m’ont de suite mis à l’aise et dans une atmosphère de confiance.

alice32460

Il y a personne qui peut m'aider ?

Jessierugg

I) The factory

I worked in a placement in Sopal, in a paper processing factory.
The factory is located at Dax in Landes.
During my work placement I stayed in the boarding school of a college and every morning I went on foot to Sopal.
I worked in the factory for the duration of eight weeks ; four weeks from 27/11/2006 to 22/12/2006 and 08/01/2007 to 02/02/2007.

II) The staff

Approximately 250 people worked in the factory.
At the laboratory I was working on my own, however, I am in good report with staff ; they were kind and very helpful. They did not leave me out.
The relationship between the management and the workers was cold; there were even strikes during my first period of work placement.
I felt good during my wok placement. They put me at ease and made me feel confident.

alice32460

Merci beaucoup pour l'aide.