Help...

Tusia · 02-09-2007, 04:38 PM

I'm looking for someone, who can help me and check my writing, because I'm having a FCE egzam in the nearest future and I'm preparing myself.
As you can see my English isn't so good and I must work hard.

Thanks for everything....

Persian Multilingual · 02-09-2007, 07:12 PM

hi,

Where is the text you are talking about then?

Tusia · 02-09-2007, 07:21 PM

Well I guess now I can publish it...
Peter opened the door and saw Jack standing in the doorway. Jack had returned, and Peter was frightened. He didn’t know what had happened to his friend. He looked so odd and scary. His face was almost grey, his hair was in big mess and the only thing ,which reminded old Jack were his green eyes. Suddenly, Jack, or something, which was looking like him started moving. Peter tried to move himself, but his feet were still in the same place. When the monster was quite next to Peter, he was able to move away and he started running across the street. He came to the nearest park when suddenly, all lights in the avenue went off. Peter started shouting, the darkness was so black and black. When Peter opened his eyes and saw Jack in the bed, he realised that it was only a nightmare.

and another one
I am writing to you to ask some questions about Aventure Weekend, because I want to spent fantastic holiday with my friends.
Firstly, I want to know, if adventure is needed, because some of them prefair more quiet and calm places.
Next thing is about activities. Besides those kind of sport like sailing or climbing ,is it possible to canoeing there? We love this sport.
The price includes almost everything, does it mean that food too?
Some of us like spending time active, but there are some exceptions. We love sailing, canoeing and swimming. In the evenings we used to spent time together next to the fireplace or camp fire.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. I hope that everything will be fine, and we will spent really good time in your Adventure Weekend.

and I must say that I'm not good at writing formal letter

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Tusia Growing Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Polnd Posts: 26 Tusia is an unknown character at this point	Help... I'm looking for someone, who can help me and check my writing, because I'm having a FCE egzam in the nearest future and I'm preparing myself. As you can see my English isn't so good and I must work hard. Thanks for everything....
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02-09-2007, 07:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
Tusia Growing Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Polnd Posts: 26 Tusia is an unknown character at this point	Well I guess now I can publish it... Peter opened the door and saw Jack standing in the doorway. Jack had returned, and Peter was frightened. He didn’t know what had happened to his friend. He looked so odd and scary. His face was almost grey, his hair was in big mess and the only thing ,which reminded old Jack were his green eyes. Suddenly, Jack, or something, which was looking like him started moving. Peter tried to move himself, but his feet were still in the same place. When the monster was quite next to Peter, he was able to move away and he started running across the street. He came to the nearest park when suddenly, all lights in the avenue went off. Peter started shouting, the darkness was so black and black. When Peter opened his eyes and saw Jack in the bed, he realised that it was only a nightmare. and another one I am writing to you to ask some questions about Aventure Weekend, because I want to spent fantastic holiday with my friends. Firstly, I want to know, if adventure is needed, because some of them prefair more quiet and calm places. Next thing is about activities. Besides those kind of sport like sailing or climbing ,is it possible to canoeing there? We love this sport. The price includes almost everything, does it mean that food too? Some of us like spending time active, but there are some exceptions. We love sailing, canoeing and swimming. In the evenings we used to spent time together next to the fireplace or camp fire. I am looking forward to hearing from you. I hope that everything will be fine, and we will spent really good time in your Adventure Weekend. and I must say that I'm not good at writing formal letter
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