02-08-2007, 07:13 PM
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corection ma redaction
Bonjour, besoin d'aide pour la coreection de mon dialogue
The girl: Hello! mama how are you Mam : fine thanks and your journey with your father ? The girl: it was super ! i love papa ! he is great and we have visit the zoo ! Mam: I am jealous The girl : No, mam ! i would sait that father is different of you! Today, it the happiest day of my live! Mam: I have seen that you are happy I have seen in your eye two lights ! i don't say why.. The girl: Mam, why are you divorced ! i will said that papa love you encore ! He said me before ! he said that his life don't exist depuis you are quite it. Mam: J'ai refais ma vie! The girl: why are you jealous ? I don't understand ! I am the the daughter of you 2. Mam : yes, i know but you see ! it is difficult ! Since the separation with your father , i would not to share you with your father because i am afraid à l'idée that you decide to leave me my baby The girl : no mama you know that i love u |
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