correction d'un texte en anglais. - Page 2

Vikram · 01-29-2007, 09:59 AM

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Originally Posted by MarkNolan

I don't want to criticize anyone, but this is the worst French - English translation I have ever seen. My dog could have done a better job.

Je ne veux critiquer personne mais je dois dire que ceci est la plus mauvaise traduction francais - anglais que j'ai jamais vue. Mon chien aurait pu faire mieux.

bonjour

au lieu de vous contenter de critiquer seulement, proposez votre traduction
cela aidera tout le monde et tout le monde pourra s'améliorer
nous sommes ici dans un forum d'entraide où chacun fait et donne ce qu'il peut gratuitement
merci d'en tenir compte

jujusete · 01-29-2007, 12:14 PM

Could you help me to translate my recommendation letter. Its very important because i go in australia in 2 week and i would like to know if my translation is correctly writes. Thank you:

"I was undersigned Mister SAINT Martin Emmanuel, Person in charge Production of the company PDP groups AMARIS, guarantees that Miss Julia BUSICCHIA was well employed within our Production unit from September, 2006 till February, 2007 as Driver of line.

Having in load(responsibility) the management of one of our lines of production and the respect for the schedule of manufacturing, Miss Julia BUSICCHIA in given evidence of a big capacity of adaptation, of a rigour in the organization of its work in everyday life, notably when his(her,its) function(office) brought him(it) to steer team-mates.

Its knowledge and his(her,its) capacity of adaptation allowed him(her) to become integrated very quickly within our teams.

Made in frontignan, January 04th, 2007, and put back(handed) in the interested to be worth that of right(law)."

Thank you
julia

vinou · 01-30-2007, 11:33 AM

Si vous pouvez faire mieux, merci de proposer vos corrections.
COrdialement, Elvina

01-29-2007, 12:14 PM	#9 (permalink)
jujusete Growing Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 10 jujusete is an unknown character at this point	help translation Could you help me to translate my recommendation letter. Its very important because i go in australia in 2 week and i would like to know if my translation is correctly writes. Thank you: "I was undersigned Mister SAINT Martin Emmanuel, Person in charge Production of the company PDP groups AMARIS, guarantees that Miss Julia BUSICCHIA was well employed within our Production unit from September, 2006 till February, 2007 as Driver of line. Having in load(responsibility) the management of one of our lines of production and the respect for the schedule of manufacturing, Miss Julia BUSICCHIA in given evidence of a big capacity of adaptation, of a rigour in the organization of its work in everyday life, notably when his(her,its) function(office) brought him(it) to steer team-mates. Its knowledge and his(her,its) capacity of adaptation allowed him(her) to become integrated very quickly within our teams. Made in frontignan, January 04th, 2007, and put back(handed) in the interested to be worth that of right(law)." Thank you julia
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01-30-2007, 11:33 AM	#10 (permalink)
vinou Growing Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: touraine Posts: 11 vinou is an unknown character at this point	Si vous pouvez faire mieux, merci de proposer vos corrections. COrdialement, Elvina
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