help me please

helenedu78 · 12-12-2006, 06:39 PM

Bonjour!

J'aurais besoin qu'une personne me regarde mon essay d'Anglais s'il vous plaît je dois absolument remonter ma moyenne

I'll go to work during my work experience, this year, in the restaurant’s parents. The restaurant is in “Saint Cyr l’école”. It is a little restaurant.
I go to the restaurant’s parents because I know how to do because I go to help my parents all Friday and I did not want to go to search the work. I'll work at 12h00 about 14h30, Monday until Saturday. I think I will do the waitress, prepare the cocktails, to take down the telephone and prepare ice cream. But I do not like to be the waitress because I always must to smile and to be nice. I think this week in work experience it is rather more holiday because I can to wake up at 11h00. I am not very to press to do this because teachers like to give us many homeworks and many big test but it is cool too because I have more one week to search the present’s Christmas.
But I am sure that I do not want to be a waitress because it is too hard, we must to finish very late and we must to work during celebrates. I prefer to work in a office because we have more free time and celebrates you do not work and we do not finish too much late.

Merci d'avance

_|h|A|R|D|y|__|b|U|d|d|Y| · 12-13-2006, 11:27 AM

I'm working, this year, in my parents' restaurant during my work experience. The restaurant is in “Saint Cyr l’école”. It is a little restaurant.
I go to my parents' restaurant because I know how to work there and I help my parents all Fridays and I didn't want to look for a job. I work from 12h00 to 14h30, from Monday to Saturday. I think I will do the waitress, prepare the cocktails, answer the phone and prepare ice cream. But I don't like to be the waitress because I always must smile and be nice. I think this week in my work experience it is more like a holiday because I can wake up at 11h00. I am not very to press (??) to do this because teachers like to give us many homeworks and big tests but it is cool too because I have one more week to look for the present’s Christmas.
But I'm sure that I don't want to be a waitress because it is too hard, we have to finish very late and we must work during the celebrations. I'd rather work in a office because we have more free time and we don't have to work in celebrations and we don't have to finish too much late.

Search=An example: The police searched my body for drugs.
I think "look for" is appropriate.

It's what I think, see you.

Maia · 12-13-2006, 12:45 PM

Hardy's done a good job! Just 2 things:

Quote:

Originally Posted by _|h|A|R|D|y|__|b|U|d|d|Y|

"I am not looking forward to doing this because teachers like to give us many homeworks and big tests but it is cool too because I have one more week to look for the present’s Christmas.
But I'm sure that I don't want to be a waitress because it is too hard, we have to finish very late and we must work during the celebrations. I'd rather work in an office because we have more free time and we don't have to work in celebrations and we don't have to finish too much late.

Au fait, c'est pour quand le devoir ? Tu nous donneras la note ?
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When do you have to give this work back? Tell us which grade you get!

_|h|A|R|D|y|__|b|U|d|d|Y| · 12-13-2006, 07:45 PM

Yeah, some mistakes.
I did it in about 2 or 3 minutes.
:P

See ya!
P.S.: Helenedu, what do you mean by "to press"?

_|h|A|R|D|y|__|b|U|d|d|Y| · 12-13-2006, 07:46 PM

Add a reputation point to me, plz.

Maia · 12-14-2006, 12:28 PM

Etre "pressé", in French, means "to be looking forward to..."

Helene, some news, please?

12-12-2006, 06:39 PM	#1 (permalink)
helenedu78 Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 9 helenedu78 is an unknown character at this point	help me please Bonjour! J'aurais besoin qu'une personne me regarde mon essay d'Anglais s'il vous plaît je dois absolument remonter ma moyenne I'll go to work during my work experience, this year, in the restaurant’s parents. The restaurant is in “Saint Cyr l’école”. It is a little restaurant. I go to the restaurant’s parents because I know how to do because I go to help my parents all Friday and I did not want to go to search the work. I'll work at 12h00 about 14h30, Monday until Saturday. I think I will do the waitress, prepare the cocktails, to take down the telephone and prepare ice cream. But I do not like to be the waitress because I always must to smile and to be nice. I think this week in work experience it is rather more holiday because I can to wake up at 11h00. I am not very to press to do this because teachers like to give us many homeworks and many big test but it is cool too because I have more one week to search the present’s Christmas. But I am sure that I do not want to be a waitress because it is too hard, we must to finish very late and we must to work during celebrates. I prefer to work in a office because we have more free time and celebrates you do not work and we do not finish too much late. Merci d'avance Last edited by helenedu78; 12-12-2006 at 06:43 PM.
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12-13-2006, 11:27 AM	#2 (permalink)
_\|h\|A\|R\|D\|y\|__\|b\|U\|d\|d\|Y\| Slang Master! Nana rocks! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Brazil Posts: 155 _\|h\|A\|R\|D\|y\|__\|b\|U\|d\|d\|Y\| is an unknown character at this point	I'm working, this year, in my parents' restaurant during my work experience. The restaurant is in “Saint Cyr l’école”. It is a little restaurant. I go to my parents' restaurant because I know how to work there and I help my parents all Fridays and I didn't want to look for a job. I work from 12h00 to 14h30, from Monday to Saturday. I think I will do the waitress, prepare the cocktails, answer the phone and prepare ice cream. But I don't like to be the waitress because I always must smile and be nice. I think this week in my work experience it is more like a holiday because I can wake up at 11h00. I am not very to press (??) to do this because teachers like to give us many homeworks and big tests but it is cool too because I have one more week to look for the present’s Christmas. But I'm sure that I don't want to be a waitress because it is too hard, we have to finish very late and we must work during the celebrations. I'd rather work in a office because we have more free time and we don't have to work in celebrations and we don't have to finish too much late. Search=An example: The police searched my body for drugs. I think "look for" is appropriate. It's what I think, see you. __________________ __________________________ I kno' this is... So So Def! Last edited by _\|h\|A\|R\|D\|y\|__\|b\|U\|d\|d\|Y\|; 12-13-2006 at 11:30 AM.
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12-13-2006, 07:45 PM	#4 (permalink)
_\|h\|A\|R\|D\|y\|__\|b\|U\|d\|d\|Y\| Slang Master! Nana rocks! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Brazil Posts: 155 _\|h\|A\|R\|D\|y\|__\|b\|U\|d\|d\|Y\| is an unknown character at this point	Yeah, some mistakes. I did it in about 2 or 3 minutes. :P See ya! P.S.: Helenedu, what do you mean by "to press"? __________________ __________________________ I kno' this is... So So Def!
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_\|h\|A\|R\|D\|y\|__\|b\|U\|d\|d\|Y\| Slang Master! Nana rocks! Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Brazil Posts: 155 _\|h\|A\|R\|D\|y\|__\|b\|U\|d\|d\|Y\| is an unknown character at this point	Add a reputation point to me, plz. __________________ __________________________ I kno' this is... So So Def!
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12-14-2006, 12:28 PM	#6 (permalink)
Maia Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Paris, France Posts: 37 Maia is an unknown character at this point	Etre "pressé", in French, means "to be looking forward to..." Helene, some news, please? __________________ http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/9...tmassk1.th.jpg
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