christof89

Bonjour,

J'ai de grande laqune en anglais et je doit faire une expression.
Si quelqu'un pouvais me le corriger les fautes, ce serrais très gentil.
Je vous remercie d'avance.

"Education is fundamental for the child.
It is the education of the child who will forge his personality.
The education of the children passes by different field.
It can pass by the sport.
Is we thus will see what is the educational value of the sport for the children ?
The sport supports the fundamental human values which are used as a basis for the full development of the children.
The practice of the sport makes it possible to the child to acquire a confidence in its capacities.
The physical activities in group is an occasion to be made friends.
The sport is for the child a means of being in relation to different age group because there is no age to make sport.
The sport is based on several value of which solidarity and fraternity, mutual respect and understanding, and full respect for the integrity and dignity of human beings.
All these values are essential with the blooming of its personality, they enrich social relations and develop fair play, which is essential not only to sport itself but also to life in society.
As a conclusion, the sport is a very effective means to educate the children.
Indeed, the sport contributes to a complete and harmonious development human being."

The_FD

J'ai un peu réarrangé tout ça

"Education is fundamental for a child.
Children's education will form their personality.
Children's education involves many fields.
sport can be one of them.
Is we thus will see what is the educational value of the sport for the children ? -> pas compris, désolé
Sport supports fundamental human values which are used as a basis for the full development of children.
Sport is able to make children acquire self confidence in his capacities.
Physical activities in group is an occasion to make friends.
Sport is for children a mean of being in relation with different age group because there is no age to practice sport.
Sport is based on several values including solidarity and fraternity, mutual respect and understanding, and full respect for the integrity and dignity of human beings.
All these values are essential with the blooming of his personality, they enrich social relations and develop fair-play, which is essential not only to sport itself but also to life in society.
As a conclusion, sport is a very effective mean to educate children.
Indeed, sport contributes to a full and harmonious human being development."

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christof89

Merci Beaucoup The_FD

Et enfaite la phrase qui devait être incompréhensible voulait dire "Nous allons donc voir quelle est la valeur éducative du sport pour les enfants ?" si tu pouvais me la traduire, je te remercie d'avance.

The_FD

many possibilities, but could be:

Then we'll see how educative for children is sport

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L'histoire de la famille Bourdillon
Les fêtes d'Hébé
The flying dancer dancing