zeichi

Bonjour, je doit rendre une présentation écrite et orale d'anglais dont sujet est "Movie Review". En effet je dois faire la présentation d'un film en rapport avec la peine de mort, pas très joyeux , et j'aimerais que l'on corrige mes fautes. Merci d'avance.

Ce n'est que le début de mon devoir car je ne l'est pas encore terminé.

The life of David Gale is an american and british movie releasing in 2003. This United International Pictures production is a thriller directed by Alan Parker. The producers of this movie are Alan Parker himself and Nicolas Cage. The life of David Gale, wich the music is composed by Alex and Jake Parker, is written by Charles Randolph. This film with small buget to compare with the Hollywood big production deals with the death penalty in Texas. The main actors , Kevin Spacey who has got the role of David Gale and Kate Winslet who playes the part of Bitsey Bloom, are acompanied by Laura Linney and Gabriel Mann who have got a secondary part.

Alan Parker, the director of The life of David Gale, is a british director, producer, actor and scripwritter. He was born the 14 February 1944 in London. Before to integrating the world of the cinema, he was a copywritter. He direct his first full-length film, Bugsy Malone, in 1976. He receive two Oscars with the movie Midnight Express in 1978 and two others Oscars in 1980 with Fame. Alan Parker who is a defender of the civic rights and freedoms have directed Missipi Burning and Come see the paradise.

Kevin Spacey, who is Davis Gale, is a professor of universoty in Texas, he is also an anti-death penalty activist. Constance Harraway, played by Laura Linney, is a good friend of David who knows that she go to death because she is suffering from a leukaemia. Ironically enough, the man is sentenced to death for the rape and murder of his colleague, Constance Harraway. Kate Winslet plays Bitsey Bloom, the brave journalist who sets out to tell to his story. In the days leading up to his execution, Gale fills her in on his life via flashbacks, which include political debates, lectures, sex with a student, rape allegations, alcoholism, divorce, and despair. As the hour of his doom approaches, Bitsey becomes convinced that Gale is the victim of a conspiracy and races against the clock to prove his innocence. She is accompanied by Zack, a trainee played by Gabriel Mann, who helps her.

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The life of David Gale is an american and british movie released in 2003. This United International Pictures production is a thriller directed by Alan Parker. The producers of this movie are Alan Parker himself and Nicolas Cage. The life of David Gale, wich music is composed by Alex and Jake Parker, is written by Charles Randolph.

This film with small buget to compare with the Hollywood big production deals with the death penalty in Texas.

je ne comprends pas franchement cette phrase mais si tu veux dire que le film a eu un petit budget par rapport aux grosses productions et qu'il parle de la peine de mort (c'etait assez ambiguë) ca devrait donner ca (je crois >> ):

This film with small buget, to compare with the Hollywood big productions, deals with the death penalty in Texas.

The main actors , Kevin Spacey who has got the role of David Gale and Kate Winslet who playes the part of Bitsey Bloom, are acompanied by Laura Linney and Gabriel Mann who have got a secondary part.

Alan Parker, the director of The life of David Gale, is a british director, producer, actor and scripwritter. He was born the 14 February 1944 in London. Before his beginnings in the world of the cinema, he was a copywritter. He directed his first full-length film, Bugsy Malone, in 1976. He received two Oscars with the movie Midnight Express in 1978 and two others Oscars in 1980 with Fame. Alan Parker who is a defender of the civic rights and freedom have directed Mississipi Burning and Come see the paradise.

Kevin Spacey, who is Davis Gale, is a professor in an university in Texas, he is also an anti-death penalty activist. Constance Harraway, played by Laura Linney, is a good friend of David who knows that she's going to die because she is suffering from a leukaemia. Ironically enough, the man is sentenced to death for the rape and murder of his colleague, Constance Harraway. Kate Winslet plays Bitsey Bloom, the brave journalist who sets out to tell his story.

le debut de la phrase suivante n'a pour moi aucun sens (jusqu'a la deuxieme virgule) désolé:
In the days leading up to his execution, Gale fills her in on his life via flashbacks, which include political debates, lectures, sex with a student, rape allegations, alcoholism, divorce, and despair.

la phrase suivante sous entend que c'est Bitsey qui va mourir (ce qui n'est pas le cas si?) et que c'est gale qui veut prouver son innocence faudrait donc changer un peu la structure (je vois pas trop comment donc je la laisse intacte):
As the hour of his doom approaches, Bitsey becomes convinced that Gale is the victim of a conspiracy and races against the clock to prove his innocence. She is accompanied by Zack, a trainee played by Gabriel Mann, who helps her.

voila c'est pas parfait mais ca apporte deja quelques corrections

zeichi

Merci d'avoir répondu et merci pour ton aide. ^^