Mini-coorection svp :-)

Pb69 · 10-22-2006, 09:54 AM

Bonjour pourriez-vous me dire si mes phrases sont correctes et éventuellement me corriger? Je vous remercie par avance

22 british soldiers have been killed in afghanistan. Yet, only 15 died in combat whereas the other 7 soldiers have been killed completely different manners.

Indeed, some died in going on anti-personnel mines while others died following made an attempt kamikazes, collapses of ruined buildings or even following armed civil attacks.

We were faced with a difficult problem and we can only note our impotence face this one.

The_FD · 10-23-2006, 03:41 PM

rapidement

22 british soldiers have been killed in Afghanistan. Yet, only 15 died fighting whereas the other 7 soldiers have been killed in completely different manners.

Indeed, some were killed by anti-personnal mines while others died because of kamikaze attacks, ruined buildings breakdown or even armed civil attacks.

We faced a difficult problem and we can only note our impotence facing this one.

Laurent Simula · 10-23-2006, 08:58 PM

You need to add a capital letter. Indeed, you shoud write British.

10-22-2006, 09:54 AM	#1 (permalink)
Pb69 Growing Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 12 Pb69 is an unknown character at this point	Mini-coorection svp :-) Bonjour pourriez-vous me dire si mes phrases sont correctes et éventuellement me corriger? Je vous remercie par avance 22 british soldiers have been killed in afghanistan. Yet, only 15 died in combat whereas the other 7 soldiers have been killed completely different manners. Indeed, some died in going on anti-personnel mines while others died following made an attempt kamikazes, collapses of ruined buildings or even following armed civil attacks. We were faced with a difficult problem and we can only note our impotence face this one.
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The_FD flying dancer Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Paris France Posts: 4,284 The_FD is a splendid one to behold The_FD is a splendid one to behold The_FD is a splendid one to behold	rapidement 22 british soldiers have been killed in Afghanistan. Yet, only 15 died fighting whereas the other 7 soldiers have been killed in completely different manners. Indeed, some were killed by anti-personnal mines while others died because of kamikaze attacks, ruined buildings breakdown or even armed civil attacks. We faced a difficult problem and we can only note our impotence facing this one. __________________ L'histoire de la famille Bourdillon Les fêtes d'Hébé The flying dancer dancing
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Laurent Simula Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Paris Posts: 5 Laurent Simula is an unknown character at this point	British You need to add a capital letter. Indeed, you shoud write British.
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