Frédéric47

Bonjour pouvez vous me corriger ceci svp


Mass production has created a homogeneity in our diet.
First of all, mass production to lead to a less expensive production cost, that it's allow to sell the product at the price low. Many criterion take place in the way of to eat: education, time, money, taste.
Moreover, the opening on the outside play in favour of this diversity.
We are in the society in which the people impoverish themselves more and more so: people buy products most attractive financial.

In addition, we notice a return to the values of the good kitchen. First of all, returns to the kitchen traditional with people who take courses of kitchen, Then, the return to the modern kitchen with cuisiners which invent, unceasingly, all kinds of techniques to vary the dishes.
Moreover, the television plays important part by proposing various emissions which promnent the return to the good kitchen

Frédéric47

First of all, people have a rhythm of life, in general sustained, and consequently, very little time has to eat. For the lunch (repas du midi), people eat sandwichts, pizza, where go in fast-food.

This way of to eat key more particularly students, the commercial ones, etc. However, we can says notices a malnutrition with this way to eat, and more and more from people suffer from obesities because this food is enough bourratifs and has a content of important grease. We can this announce that the Western world is increasingly keen on junk food

alice

Hi, Frederic told me that's for tomorrow, but I'm not able to check this text (I'm not English). So I ask you just because of his private message

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Frédéric47

C'est pour demain donc il me le faudrait pour ce soir svp

The_FD

très rapidement:

Mass production has created a homogeneity in our diet.
First of all, mass production leads to a less expensive production cost, it allows to sell products at a lower price. Many standards are taken into account in the way of eating: education, time, money, taste.
Moreover, opening wide is in favor of diversity.
We are in a society in which people impoverish themselves more and more so: people buy products more attractive financially.

In addition, we notice a return to the values of tasty cooking. First of all, return of traditional cooking with people who take courses of cooking, Then, return of modern cooking with cooks who invent, unceasingly, all kinds of techniques to vary dishes.
Moreover, television plays an important role by proposing various emissions which promnent the return of tasty cooking

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First of all, people have a rhythm of life, in general sustained, and consequently, very little time to eat. For lunch, people use to eat sandwiches, pizzas, or go ta a fast-food.

This way of eating more precisely concerns students, commercial people, etc. However, we notice a malnutrition with this way of eating, more and more people suffer of obesity because this food is too fat and does not fit people's daily activity. Then, we can assess that the Western world is increasingly keen on junk food.

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