jbb

hi every body
i translated this doc from French the problem is is it comprehensible in english or are there many mistakes correct me please

I sent you back my application because I always seek a training course or a 4 months job in a hotel. I wished that it be in human resources but most important is to leave 4 months in a hotel abroad. This stay is very important for me because it conditions my entry in master hospitality management. By the way, following a discussion with my future school of hospitality and management, I seek and need a position either in the reception, or in the service in room, or in the inventory control.

I thank you for the interest which you carry to my request.

jackspeese

Voici mes corrections, j'aurais pu faire un meilleur job avec le texte francais original a ma disposition, mais je crois que j'ai pige quand-meme le sens de ceque tu as ecrit:


I sent you my application because I am seeking a training course or a 4 month job in a hotel. I would prefer that it be in human resources; however, the most important thing for me is to work for 4 months in a hotel abroad. The reason that this is very important for me is because it is a prerequisite for my acceptance in a hospitality management master's program. In addition, as a consequence of a discussion with my future school of hospitality and management, I found out that I need and am therefore also looking for a position either in reception, room service, or in inventory control.

Thank you in advance for considering my request.