Sunnywisd

Bonjour à tous !

Voilà, je dois rendre la synthèse d'un rapport de stage en Anglais, un ami devait me corriger. Je devais recevoir la correction ce matin tôt au plus tard mais rien ! Et je dois rendre mon rapport de stage avec cette synthèse pour demain.

Il s'agit surtout de corriger le texte pour qu'il soit juste au moins au niveau grammatical et compréhensible. Normalement l'Anglais n'est pas trop un problème pour moi, donc ça devrait être assez compréhensible et je l'espère pas trop bourré de fautes ! C'est une synthèse d'environ une dizaine de pages, donc si quelqu'un a un peu de temps à me consacrer aujourd'hui pour cette correction... donnez-moi votre e-mail que je vous envois le texte.

C'est urgent et n'ayant pas internet chez moi en ce moment j'ai jusqu'à ce soir 20h30 pour récupérer le texte.


Merci mille fois par avance de votre aide précieuse

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Le mensonge donne des fleurs mais pas de fruits

nallatu

le plus simple c'est que tu postes ton rapport par petits bouts sur ce forum

Sunnywisd

Merci !

Mais ça risque pas de trop "pourrir" le forum ? Parce que 10 pages c'est quand même assez long...

Enfin pour commencer voici l'intro :

After having studied at the ESTRI, a school of languages, translation and international relations, I chose to continue my studies in Lyon 3 and I integrated a MBA. The programme of this MBA particularly interested me for its courses in languages and marketing. As part of this MBA I had to find a training course. I searched for internship thanks to which I could practise languages and widen my knowledge in marketing, since it is the sector in which I chose I want to specialize.

I finally decided to do my internship in E-marketing at Pro-G-Software, because it was the offer which corresponded more to my expectations. The job consisted in developing a market in Germany. I think that German is a very important language from an economic and commercial point of view especially in Europe. In my opinion it was a very good opportunity to put my competences into practice and to acquire a certain professional experience, which is particularly interesting in the world of the work of today.
My training course within the company Pro-G-Software began on January 31, 2006 and will be completed on May 31, 2006. My report is divided in 2 parts : The first part is a description of the firm and its sector. The second part deals with the tasks I had to do during my training course.

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Le mensonge donne des fleurs mais pas de fruits

marielameche

salut,
voila deja quelques corrections, si ce n'est pas trop tard..


After having studied at the ESTRI, a school of languages, translation and international relations, I chose to continue my studies in Lyon 3 and I integrated a MBA. I was particularly interested in the programme of this MBA because of its languages and marketing courses. As part of this MBA I had to find a training course. I looked for a work placement that would allow me to practise languages and widen my knowledge in marketing, since it is the field which I chose to specialize in.

I eventually decided to do my internship in E-marketing at Pro-G-Software, because it was the offer which corresponded best to my expectations. The job consisted in developing a market in Germany. I think that German is a very important language from an economic and commercial point of view, especially in Europe. In my opinion it was a very good opportunity to put my competences into practice and to acquire some professional experience, which is particularly valuable on the work market today.
My training course within the company Pro-G-Software began on January 31st, 2006 and will be completed on May 31, 2006. My report is divided in 2 parts : The first part is a description of the firm and its field of activity. The second part deals with the tasks I had to do during my training course.

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