Terminator

Bonjour, je dois envoyer mon cd en urgence ce soir, pouvez-vous me le corriger rapidement(c'est pour un stage qui doit ABSOLUMENT se faire en été):

I am currently a fourth year student in engineering and I am really interested in applying for a summer intership in your company.

I am in engineering school at the ***(school name) computer science and general management major (pour dire en spécialité informatique et gestion), which is why I would like to become a part of your IT department. The duration of this training course is set to 4 weeks but an extension can be considered according to your company needs.

I am a motivated and proactive person and I am really very keen on new technologies. I am fully conscious of the amount of work required and I am ready to face this responsibility. This experience would be a great opportunity to enrich myself through interpersonal relations and enterprise challenges. Should you have any questions, please contact me on ****(MAIL) or by mobile phone:****(PHONE)



UN GRAND MERCI

EDIT: Vous pouvez egalement la corriger si vous trouvez qu'elle ne donne pas bien.

Terminator

Pourriez-vous m'aider!! C'est assez urgent.

Un gran dmerci d'avance à vous.

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I can't see that there is anything major that needs doing to it, leave it as it is.