Napalmia

Hello,

I have written this letter, in order to send this onr to a big company, specialised in motorbike equipment.

I'm French and i think that ive done a lot of mistakes in this letter, so please anyone can help me to correct?

Thanks a lot!

This is the letter:

chiara410

Je suis italienne mais j'habitais à Londres et je parle anglais.
ça c'est ma correction, j'espere qqn anglais va te reprondre aussi:

Dear Paris hilton

I’ve read the advertisement for XXXXXXXXXX on your website ,
I'm 26 years old, osteopathic student in London, UK, after done 3 years in France. (Not cool , to introduce like this, need to modify this after...je pense comme ça aussi)
I'm a racing motorbike fan, I practice both (both quoi?) on road and on track, and i also pratice extreme sports (Auto, Snowboard, BMX, MX etc...).

I also provide care (tu veux dire quoi ici? peut-etre assistance?) during motorbike training sessions. Doing so gives me experience in the fields of traumatology, physiology, and communication skills.

Moreover, I have to confess that occasionally some bikers ask me advices concerning their future equipment.
Obviously, I always suggest your brand, XXXXX, considering the fact that I'm fully equipped in XXXXXX .

During my academic studies, I have focused on the study of anatomy, especially biomechanical aspects (the study of human body mechanics , especially of the forces exerted by muscles and gravity on the skeletal structures), and physiology in all its forms.
Furthermore, future research in safety equipment must focus on an exact and precise analysis of the various physiological constraints to which the human body is directly subjected.
Being a rider myself, understanding the attempt of riders in term of ergonomy is easy.

I have great skills in computing and the technology of tomorrow. I have also received an award from Microsoft for my website, which deals with embedded technologies.
Surely the same you actually use in your Advanced Security Technology Suit.


Beacuse of all the above reasons, I wish to employ my education, my excellent motorsports knowledge (especially motorcycles), my people/communication, my strong computer skills in your company in order
to participate in the development of racing equipments for the future.

I wonder whether I’m the right candidate for the position you are looking for because my interests in life are the same that you require for this job and for this reason it will be a pleasure to work for your company.

“one goal, one vision”

If you could give me the opportunity of working I’m sure you would not be disappointed. I will pay you back with my great skills, really hard-working personality and the same vision to make goal (peut - etre to score est meilleur que to make goal) that you adopt in your slogan.
I’m also interested in the development of my career with XXXXXX that I found the best brand for equippement (il y a 2 p? je me ne souviens pas )and I will guaranty you a long commitment service.

My English level is fluent as I live in London and I feel very confident with the language.

The possibility of having to relocate does not faze me in the least.
I have no problems whatsoever with relocating.

I am readily (readily?? je n'ai jamais ecouté ça) available should you desire more information or an interview.

Thank you in advance and kind regards.

__________________
Et in arcadia ego

darksteppa

To Napalmia,
I am also interested in the physiology of motorcycle racing and am hoping to perform a scientific study in this area to complete my MSc. I would be grateful if you have any information (journals, websites etc) that you could advise me on with regards to this.

Regards

darksteppa