mickael otenga

"je n'aime pas le travail de gardien de zoo car c'est tro dificile car il faut se levé a 6 heure meme plus tot pour s' occuper des animaux.De plus c'est beaucoup trop de responsabilté.On a meme plus le temps de voir sa famille , on a quasiment plus de vie privé a cause de se travail.Et l'hygiène ne doit pa trop régner dans un zoo.Il faut toujours etre attentif et aux soins pour les animaux.Ce travail est vraiment une passion pour les animaux"
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jackspeese

S'il s'agit d'un devoir sscolaire, il faut d'abord que tu fasse un effort toi-meme, et puis je t'aiderais volontiers!

mickael otenga

jarriv pas dsl

The_FD

Essaie au moins un début, ou quelques bribes de phrases
Avec la volonté tout est possible

mickael otenga

I don't like a Job of zoo keepers because is more dificult.This job is very dangerous because the are a jungle animals and the zoo keepers had to crash into the cage for clean a animals cage.He had to get up at 6 am it's very dificult.He had to be organiz for this job because a zoo keepers he doesn't see their family , the zoo keepers he hasn't a private live because he had to take care zoo animals.the zoo keepers is more dificult than other job because it's exhausting of the zoo animals he had to be atentif with zoo animals the zoo keepers maybe they can anytime for the zoo animals.the job of the zoo keepers it's very dificult.this job is a passion for the animals

The_FD

Super
Je propose quelques corrections et Jack en aura surement d'autres


I don't like being a custodian at the zoo because it is too hard. This job is very dangerous because there are jungle animals and the zoo keepers have to step into the boxes to clean them. We have to wake up at 6 am or sooner which is very bothering. We have to be organized for this job. A zoo keeper don't have time to see his family, the zoo keepers don't have a private life because he has to take care of the animals. Being a zoo keeper is more difficult than other jobs because it's exhausting. We have to be assiduous with zoo animals, to take care at any time. the job of zoo keeper is very difficult. this job is a passion for animals

J'ai juste corrigé ce que tu as ecrit en anglais. Ce n'est pas exactement ce que tu avais mis en français mais au moins c'est de toi

Bonne continuation

jackspeese

I don't like being a zoo keeper at the zoo because it is too hard. This job is very dangerous because there are jungle animals and the zoo keepers have to step into the boxes to clean them. We have to wake up at 6 am or sooner, which is very bothersome. We have to be organized for this job. Zoo keepers don't have time to see their families, the zoo keepers don't have private lives because they have to take care of the animals. Being a zoo keeper is more difficult than other jobs because it's exhausting. We have to be attentive to zoo animals, to take care at all times. The job of zoo keeper is very difficult. This job is a passion for animals.