titi1989

bonjour tout le monde

voila j'ai redigé la biographie en anglais mais il me manque des choses que je n'arrive pas a traduire en francais lol donc si vous voulez bien m'aider et me dire si ma traduction est bonne aussi je vous dis merci beaucoup! byzouz a tous et merci


Hi, i'm in hight school and i am 16 years old.We go to school from 8a.m. to 5p.m. every day except on Sunday.All of our classes are mondatory and wu have modulate in half groups for help people in difficulty.We also have hour and half lunch.j'adore la musique!j'ecoute de la musique n'importe quand et n'importe où: quand je suis dans mon lit le soir, quand je me reveille le matin, quand je prend mon bain, quand je pars et je reviens du lycée. Tous les mercredi je fais du hip-hop et ensuite je vais au chant!t-ai-je dit que j'habite a paris juste a coté de l'arc de triomphe donc juste a coté de la plus belle avenue de monde! avec mes amis nous partons faire du shopping, au cinema et trainons dehord le soir sur cette si belle avenue!mon lycée est monument historique et est très connu because de nombreuse celebrités ont fait leurs etudes la bas comme notre president jacques chirac!notre haulle est le haulle eiffel et tu sais pourquoi? parce que c'est Monsieur eiffel lui meme qui l'a créé comme il a créé la tour eiffel c'est pour cela! paris have a lot of monuments, a long story and his passed is long too so ican explain what i know about in this e-mail moreover i must go to do my homework because après i have a party...Here in france les lycéens n'ont pas de job like you donc après avoir fait nos devoirs maisons on peut fiar ce que l'on veut... so i say good night to you and i look forward to meeting each other...!

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The_FD

Bon voilà ce que je propose, mais attend quand même la relecture d'un anglais de langue maternelle, c'est toujours mieux
ah oui j'ai passé les i qui doivent s'ecrire I quand il signifient je

Hi, i'm in high school and i am 16 years old. We go to school from 8a.m. to 5p.m. everyday except on Sunday. All of our classes are mandatory and we are devided into groups to help people in difficulty. We also have an hour and half to eat.

I love music! I am listening to music whenever and wherever: in my bed at night, in the morning when I wake up, in the bath, when I go to school and when I come back. Every wednesday I have a hip hop course and then I sing! Did I tell you I lived in Paris, right next to the arc de triomphe, that is to say just next to the most beuatiful avenue in the world! My friends and I use to go shopping, to the movie theatre and to walk at night and this so wonderful avenue! My school is a historically classified monument and is very well known due to celebrities who studied there. Our president Jacques Chirac is an example! The hall is named Eiffel hall, don't you know why? because Mr Eiffel himself buildt it, just as he created the Eifeel tower!

paris has a lot of monuments, a long story and its past is too long to explain what i know about it in this e-mail. Moreover i must go to do my homework because after i have a party...Here in france students do not have jobs like you, so after we are done with our homeworks we can do what we want... so i say good night to you and i look forward to meeting each other...!

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L'histoire de la famille Bourdillon
Les fêtes d'Hébé
The flying dancer dancing

titi1989

merci beaucoup!!!!!!!!!!!

Genius cindy

Hi, I'm in high school and I am 16 years old. We go to school from 8 a.m. to 5 p.m. every day except Sundays. All of our classes are mandatory and we are divided into groups for extra help. We also have an hour and half to eat.

I love music! I listen to music whenever and wherever: in my bed at night, in the morning when I wake up, in the bath, when I go to school and when I come home. Every Wednesday I have a hip hop course and then I sing! Did I tell you I live in Paris, right next to the Arc de Triomphe, that is, right next to the most beautiful avenue in the world! My friends and I go shopping, to the movies, and walk around at night, all on this wonderful avenue! My school is classified as an historical monument and is very well known because of the famous people who have studied there. Our president Jacques Chirac is an example! The hall is named Eiffel Hall. Why, you may ask? Because Mr Eiffel himself built it, just as he designed the Eiffel Tower!

Paris has a lot of monuments, a long history and its past is too long to explain in an e-mail. Besides, I have to do my homework because afterwards I'm going to a party..Here in France students do not have jobs like you, so after we are done with our homework we can do what we want... so I will say good night to you and I look forward to meeting you...!