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Old 09-27-2005, 11:33 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Civil Engineering Technician

Born in .........(France), French and German nationalities.


>> Education

2004-2005 Institute of applied sciences (Civil Engineering) of Saarbrücken (Germany)

2002-2004 Civil engineering in the institute of applied sciences in Toulouse’s University, France Diploma: DUT Civil engineering, option Construction.

1999-2002 Clos-Banet college, Perpignan

Diploma: Degree in science, option engineering, and specialty: physics and chemistry with honors


>> Experience

Apr.-Jun. 04 Technician for the engineering and design department (firm name) in Brighton (England) Structural Engineering, Civil Engineering and Building Engineering

June 2003 Work experience at the public Works of Perpignan, design office. (France)

Summer 2002 and
2003 Webmaster for (firm name) in Munich (Germany),

>> Skills

Design, drawing, CAD, Topography, Organization, metallic construction, RC construction, wood construction, materials et geotechnical works, Structures, applied physics.

>> Computer science

AutoCAD, VBA programming applied to civil engineering, Excel.
Software development, example: ........... (was the subject of an article in the New York Times)

>> Languages

Bilingual German and French
Fluent in English and Spanish (spoken and written languages), learning Polish

>> Leisure

Webmaster of ....................
Literature, philosophy, sciences, traveling, handball
Foreign cultures & languages
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and that too please : Dear Hiring Manager,
As a Civil engineering technicien, I look for a design office position in Warsaw. As you will be able to see on my attached Resume, I have already experience in Structure design as well as in civil works. Please let me know if you are interested, so I can provide more information.
I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration.
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voilà quelques corrections en attendant celles d'un anglophone de naissance


Civil Engineering Technician

Born in .........(France), French and German nationalities.


>> Education

2004-2005 Institute of applied sciences (Civil Engineering) of (in?) Saarbrücken (Germany) (peut être tu peux mettre le nom de l'institut?)

2002-2004 Civil engineering in the institute of applied sciences in Toulouse () University, France.
Diploma: DUT Civil engineering, option Construction.

1999-2002 Clos-Banet college, Perpignan
Diploma: Degree in science, option engineering, and specialty: physics and chemistry with honors


>> (Work, professionnal?) Experience

Apr.-Jun. 2004 Technician for the engineering and design department of (firm name) in Brighton (England) Structural Engineering, Civil Engineering and Building Engineering

June 2003 Work experience at the public Works of Perpignan, design office. (France)

Summer 2002 and 2003 Webmaster for (firm name) in Munich (Germany),

>> Skills

Design, drawing, CAD, Topography, Organization, metallic construction, RC construction, wood construction, materials et geotechnical works, Structures, applied physics.

>> Computer science

AutoCAD, VBA programming applied to civil engineering, Excel.
Software development, example: ........... (was the subject of an article in the New York Times) références du journal peut être; dates, numéro, page...?

>> Languages

Bilingual German and French
Fluent in English and Spanish (spoken and written languages), learning Polish

>> Leisure

Webmaster of ....................
Literature, philosophy, sciences, traveling, handball
Foreign cultures & languages


Dear Hiring Manager,
As a Civil engineering technician, I look for a design office position in Warsaw. As you will be able to see on (read in?) my attached Resume, I have already an experience in Structure design as well as in civil works. Please let me know if you are interested, so I can provide more information.
I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration.
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