Overwork of my text...

Petro23 · 09-21-2005, 08:11 PM

I am not that good in english writing but I have to write a text. Could u correct the grammar and other mistakes I made?

Quote:

When we arrive at Liverpool we will rent a VW Polo (near the airport are few rent stations) which costs 33pound per day, for driving to Cardiff. Arrived at Cardiff we have to search a Hotel for 2 nights. For our claims we should take the Holiday Inn Cardiff City Centre which will costs us for double-bed rooms 39pound per day. Included in this price is the parking option. Due to the fact that we will arrive after 23:00 we will make our sightseeing tour the next morning. After a good breakfast at our Hotel we leave and go by feed some meters to the Cardiff castle at the castle street.
At Cardiff-Castle we suppose to see old ruins and the Norman conquest. This trip will costs us with the full guiding tour 6.59pound per person. We planning a duration of 3-4 hours there. So we could go at 13:00 till 16:00 to the Techniquest Museum by car at Stuart Street. This will be a really funny trip because we will see over 180 exhibits. After this long period of culture and fun we could discover a bit the city an can buy some souvenirs or other things. In the evening we will relaxe a bit at the hotel bar and drink some drinks.

Thanks for all help.

Petro23 · 09-25-2005, 01:24 PM

PLs hlp me

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