erikaguduff

bonjour ,

je suis française, j'ai traduit mon cv en anglais mais je voudrais savoir si c'est correct ( fautes, mauvaises expressions...) est ce qu'une aimable personne pourrais m'aider!!!!!(L'ORIGINAL EN FRANCAIS EST A LA FIN)
merci d'avance :

Student in engineering
Job objective : T.F.E. ( Work of end of studies )
EXPERIENCES PROFESSIONNELLES
 August 2005 : ADREXO, firm of disribution, Sarcelles, France
Distributor,summer job : handing out of leaflets (Carrefour, E.Leclerc, PC city, IKEA …)
August -
October 2004 : SARA, oil industry, Martinique, Caribbean island
Technician in the analysis laboratory of oil products, practical training
two months in the centre of the refining of oil
verification of the equipment (Standard : AFNOR)
 June -
July 2004 : EDF, power station, Martinique, Caribbean island
Technician in the “performance” team, practical training
two months in the power station of martinique
analysed in real time the four-stroke engine’s parameters
quality application : Q.P.P. (Quality Plan Processus)
I wrote a technical report on the physical measures
 June -
July 2003: FRANCE TELECOM (EQUANT),
international telecommunication firm, Paris, France
Executive assistant into a business agency, training period
assisted the agency director in management, follow-up customer
relation, merchandising
daily inventory of the material, checking the case, stocks,
inputs/outputs and reception of telephones

Rédaction d’un rapport de stage pour chacune de ces expériences

FORMATION
2003 - 2005 : Engineer School of Lyon : E.C.A.M.
Two-year engineer programme (tantamount to a master in research)
 2001 - 2003 : Engineer School of Lyon : E.C.A.M.
Two-year course in engineer technical sciences (Preparatory courses)
 2001 : French secondary school diploma with honours (Scientific diploma)


INFORMATIONS COMPLEMENTAIRES

 LANGUAGES : French : mother tongue
English : fluent (travels in UK and USA )
Spanish : smattering
 COMPUTERS : Ms-Dos and Windows : Microsoft Office ( Word, Excel, PowerPoint)
Programming : JAVA, Maple
ProEngineer, Solid Works ( CAO ), MathLab
divers :
Training courses in a nursery school
I gave courses to children having difficulties in school
Enjoy playing tennis
Excellent references available upon request


VOICI L'ORIGINAL =>

ETUDIANTE INGENIEUR
T.F.E. (Travaux de Fin d’Etudes)

EXPERIENCES PROFESSIONNELLES

Août à
Octobre 2004 :
SARA (Société Anonyme de la Raffinerie des Antilles), en Martinique.
Stage de deux mois dans une centrale de raffinage du pétrole
* technicien au sein du laboratoire d’analyses pétrolières
* Vérification de la conformité de l’appareillage utilisé : étalonnages et caractérisations (Normes : AFNOR, Certification : COFRAC)

Juin à
Juillet 2004 :
EDF Centrale de Pointe des Carrières, en Martinique.
Stage de deux mois dans une centrale de production d’électricité
*Technicien au sein de la cellule « performance »
*Démarche qualité : mise en place d’un P.Q.P. (Plan Qualité Processus) (réalisation d’audits, transmission des informations…)
*Rédaction d’un rapport technique sur les mesures physiques

Juin à
Juillet 2003:
FRANCE TELECOM, à paris
Stage de cinq semaines dans une agence commerciale
* Assistante du directeur d’agence
*Gestion des stocks ; contrôles ; suivis ; merchandising ; accueil clientèle

Rédaction d’un rapport de stage pour chacune de ces expériences

MikeL

Engineering student
Job objective : T.F.E. ( Work experience at end of studies)
PREVIOUS WORK EXPERIENCE
 August 2005 : ADREXO, distribution company, Sarcelles, France
Distributor, summer job : handing out leaflets (Carrefour, E.Leclerc, PC city, IKEA …)
August -
October 2004 : SARA, oil industry, Martinique (Caribbean)
Technician in oil refinery laboratory (practical training)
* two month assignment
* equipment verification (Standard : AFNOR)
 June -
July 2004 : EDF, electricity generating plant, Martinique (Caribbean)
Technician in “performance” team (practical training)
* two month assignment
* Quality Control: implementation of Process Quality Plan
* wrote technical report on physical measures


 June -
July 2003: FRANCE TELECOM (EQUANT),
international telecommunication firm, Paris, France
Executive assistant in business agency (on-job training)
assisted the agency director in management, follow-up customer
relations, merchandising
daily stock inventory; check and follow-up; customer reception

Written report for each of these assignments.

TRAINING
2003 - 2005 : Engineering School, Lyon : E.C.A.M.
Two-year engineering programme (equivalent to a master in research)
 2001 - 2003 : Engineering School, Lyon : E.C.A.M.
Two-year course in engineering technical sciences (Preparatory courses)
 2001 : French secondary school diploma with honours (Diploma in Science)


ADDITIONAL INFORMATION

 LANGUAGES : French : mother tongue
English : fluent (travels in UK and USA )
Spanish : basic knowledge
 COMPUTERS : Ms-Dos and Windows : Microsoft Office ( Word, Excel, PowerPoint)
Programming : JAVA, Maple
ProEngineer, Solid Works ( CAO ), MathLab
miscellaneous :
Training courses in a nursery school
I gave courses to children having difficulties in school
Enjoy playing tennis
Excellent references available upon request

erikaguduff

thanks a lot for your help and your corection

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kika