Titiping

Hello!
I am asking for your help again! In fact, I am French student and I am now finishing my MA entitled "Advertising and translation: A study of some advertisements by the Clarins brand and of their translation."
It is all written in English and it is pretty long : about 80 pages at the moment. I need someone, preferably a native english-speaker, to correct my work until the 1st of september.
Actually, I think I have done many grammatical faults such as adding or forgotting some "s" to verbs or misusing some words, or expressing ideas in a bizarre way, because when I am thinking to the ideas I have to develop, my English is bad. I re- read my work, but I am sure some errors and awkward clauses remained.
So, if you are interested in reading and correcting a MA about advertising and translation, I will send you my work by email. Mine is : titiping@caramail.com And if many are interested, work will be divided!!!!
Of course, if you need my help in turn for anything, I will be delighted to be of any use!

Titiping

Anybody? Here is the outline of my work, so that you can see if you are interested!


I- Advertising
1 History and evolution of advertising(In the USA and in France)

2) The place of advertising in our economy.

3) Translating advertisements...


II- Cosmopolitan: a women magazine, 40% of adverts.
1) History of the magazine, its ethics

2) French and English versions of the magazine: different content, common points; but the same constraints in the field of advertising.

3) Main adverts published in Cosmo.
(Translational analysis of a few adverts published in the magazine)


III- Clarins: natural products advertised.
1)History and economy of the firm.

2)Translation and Clarins.

3)Translational issues involved in the Clarins advertisements.
Paramètres exogènes: legislation and culture
Paramètres endogènes: organization of advertisements = marketing choice
Translational issues: Names (brand name and product names) Catchphrases Headlines
Common points between adverts: Vocabulary Grammatical errors
Advertising texts in gl.



Each point makes only a few pages. Some parts have already been corrected by my teacher and by people (many thanks to G.B). But, if your are interested in reading and/or correcting some points, don't hesitate!!!