Could you correct the text.

Dariusz Śmietanka · 08-04-2005, 08:21 AM

The text is about the modem of a certain type. I do not know if the register is suitable for this kind of text. I mean particularly "get the most out of your money" in the context of buying valuable equipment.

Here goes the text:
"They allow for the choice of one of the two interfaces, that can be selected according to the installation conditions. Thanks to that you get the most out of your money, widen the scope of possible applications, and limit the variety of used equipment".

Thank you in advance.

Darek

tim776 · 08-11-2005, 12:42 PM

Darek, I think this looks fine as it is. I will make some slight adjustments, but you do not have to make them.

"There are two choices for the interface that you can select according to the installation conditions. Thanks to that, you get the most out of your money, widen the scope of possible applications, and limit the variety of used equipment".

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Dariusz Śmietanka Junior Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 6 Dariusz Śmietanka is an unknown character at this point	Could you correct the text. The text is about the modem of a certain type. I do not know if the register is suitable for this kind of text. I mean particularly "get the most out of your money" in the context of buying valuable equipment. Here goes the text: "They allow for the choice of one of the two interfaces, that can be selected according to the installation conditions. Thanks to that you get the most out of your money, widen the scope of possible applications, and limit the variety of used equipment". Thank you in advance. Darek
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tim776 Junior Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: USA Posts: 18 tim776 is an unknown character at this point	Darek, I think this looks fine as it is. I will make some slight adjustments, but you do not have to make them. "There are two choices for the interface that you can select according to the installation conditions. Thanks to that, you get the most out of your money, widen the scope of possible applications, and limit the variety of used equipment".
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