Traduction vers l'anglais

papa coin coin · 08-02-2012, 01:55 PM

Bonjour à tous !

Je me présente rapidement, je m'appelle Antoine, et je suis un accro d'un jeu vidéo (Trackmania), je créer des cartes et plus particulièrement avec des histoires, afin de toucher un public plus grand, je traduit mes textes aussi en Anglais, j'utilise google traduction, mais on me reproche qu'il y ait des fautes, déjà qu'en Français j'en fais beaucoup, alors pour faire des correction en Anglais ...

voici mon texte:

Quote:

Pour jouer sans l'histoire, rouler le long de la piscine ...
MOD sans histoire activé !

-Dans ce Château reignait la tranquilité ...
jusqu'à ce que ...
... ILLIDAN ait pris le Château en sa possession ...
Avec l'aide des habitants, reprennez le contrôle !

-L'entrée à été fermée ! Trouvez un moyen d'entrer ...

-Prenez ce parchemin et emmenez le à Elina.

-Bonjour, que m'apportez vous ?
... un parchemin ?!?
Sur ce parchemin, il est écrit que celui qui le porte,
est une personne vaillante,
vous allez donc pouvoir nous libérer d'ILLIDAN.

-Il n'y a qu'un seul moyen de le tuer ...
Le marteau de RAGNAROS !
mais il va vous falloir réaliser une potion pour le porter !
Je préviens les villageaois de votre arrivée,
ils vous aideront dans votre parcours ...

-Vous avez besoin d'une fiole d'eau pour fabriquer la potion ...
Trouvez la !

-Vous n'avez pas pris la fiole !
-Fiole trouvée !

-Il vous faut une racine de bambou.

-Racine de bambou trouvée !

-Présente toi au laboratoire, et prend de l'air éternel

-Voici de l'air éternel, mon ami !
Va voir Nimbus, il se trouve à la taverne.

-Vous avez tous les ingrédients, merci,
je vais pouvoir vous préparer la potion ...
Tenez la voici !
Buvez la lorsque vous serez au pied du marteau de Ragnaros.

-Vous avez obtenu une pièce d'armure !

-Ne vous approchez pas des gardes !

-Les gardiens d'ILLIDAN vous ont tué !

-C'est le moment de boire la potion ...

-Le marteau vous à brûlé !

-Pour tuer ILLIDAN vous devez le frappez au visage.

-Votre armure est anéantie ! et la potion ne fait plus effet !

-C'est la FIN !!!!

-Vous êtes mort !

je vous remercie d'avance, car en trouvant ce forum, j'ai un souffle d'espoir

Bonne journée

papa coin coin · 08-04-2012, 03:18 AM

que pensez-vous de ceci :

-To play without the story, roll along the pool ...
-MOD without the story enabled!

-In this castle has lived in tranquility ...
until ...
... Illidan took the castle in its possession ...
With the help of residents, trace back control!

-The entrance has been closed! Find a way to enter ...
-Take this scroll and give it to Elina.
-Hello, what do you bring to me
... a parchment?!?
On this scroll, it says that the wearer,
is a brave person,
you will be able to free ourselves from Illidan.
There is only one way to kill him ...
The hammer of Ragnaros!
but you will have to make a potion to wear it!
I warn all villageaois of your arrival,
they will help you in your journey ...
-You need a vial of water to make the potion ...
Find it !
-You do not take the vial!
-Vial found!
-You need a bamboo root.
-Root of bamboo found!
-Present yourself to the laboratory, and take the eternal air
-Here the eternal air, my friend!
-Go to see Nimbus, he is in the tavern
-You have all the ingredients, thank you,
I go to be able to prepare the potion ...
Hold this !
drink it, when you are at the foot of the hammer of Ragnaros.
-You got a piece of armor!
-Do not approach the guards!
-The guards of Illidan kill you !
-It's time to drink the potion ...
-The hammer burning you!
-To kill Illidan you must hit in the face.
-Your armor is destroyed! and the potion is no longer effective!
-This is the END!!
-You are dead!

papa coin coin · 08-05-2012, 06:18 AM

avec l'aide d'un ami, on a obtenu ceci:

Quote:

Drive along the pool to play without the story.
The story has been disabled!

In this castle life has been tranquil
until one tragic day...
Illidan took the castle into his possession...
With the help of the residents, help take back control of the castle.

The entrance has been closed! Find another way to enter...

Take this parchment and give it to Elina.

Hello adventurer, what brings you to me?
... A parchment!?
This parchment says, that its bearer,
is a brave person,
It also says that you will be able to free us from Illidan.
There is only one way to kill him...
... With the hammer of Ragnaros!
To be able to wear it, you will have to make a potion!
I will warn all the villagers of your arrival
they will help you on your quest...

You need a vial of water to make the potion...
Find it!
You haven't got the vial!
You found the vial!

You need a bamboo root.
You found bamboo root!

Go to the laboratory, and get the eternal air.
Here is the eternal air, my friend!
Go see Nimbus, he's in the tavern.

You have all the ingredients needed,
I will go and prepare the potion...
Take this!
Drink it when you are at the foot of the hammer of Ragnaros.

You got a piece of armor! (you get multiple pieces of armor in the track)

Don't approach the guards!
The guards of Illidan kill you ! (this sentence is triggered when you approach the guards)

It's time to drink the potion...
The hammer is burning you (this sentence is triggered when you fall)

You must hit Illidan in the face to kill him.
Your armour is destroyed! And the potion is no longer effective!

This is the END!
You are dead!

Romance-Writer · 08-07-2012, 11:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by papa coin coin

avec l'aide d'un ami, on a obtenu ceci:

I've been camping in the Nunavut so I haven't had a phone or internet access. (It was wonderful!!!)

Bref ce soir ou demain matin Je vais jeter un coup d'œil sur votre texte.

08-04-2012, 03:18 AM	#2 (permalink)
papa coin coin Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 3	que pensez-vous de ceci : -To play without the story, roll along the pool ... -MOD without the story enabled! -In this castle has lived in tranquility ... until ... ... Illidan took the castle in its possession ... With the help of residents, trace back control! -The entrance has been closed! Find a way to enter ... -Take this scroll and give it to Elina. -Hello, what do you bring to me ... a parchment?!? On this scroll, it says that the wearer, is a brave person, you will be able to free ourselves from Illidan. There is only one way to kill him ... The hammer of Ragnaros! but you will have to make a potion to wear it! I warn all villageaois of your arrival, they will help you in your journey ... -You need a vial of water to make the potion ... Find it ! -You do not take the vial! -Vial found! -You need a bamboo root. -Root of bamboo found! -Present yourself to the laboratory, and take the eternal air -Here the eternal air, my friend! -Go to see Nimbus, he is in the tavern -You have all the ingredients, thank you, I go to be able to prepare the potion ... Hold this ! drink it, when you are at the foot of the hammer of Ragnaros. -You got a piece of armor! -Do not approach the guards! -The guards of Illidan kill you ! -It's time to drink the potion ... -The hammer burning you! -To kill Illidan you must hit in the face. -Your armor is destroyed! and the potion is no longer effective! -This is the END!! -You are dead!
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