verify my Text , plizZz

Miki · 06-10-2004, 11:15 PM

Help Me , plIzzZZ.. i'm currently in second year in my BTS high school diploma.. Can i have a Verification of my Text ??

I thank all repost.

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I had an electrotechnical baccalaureat two years ago and I am currently in second year of Patent High-level technicien in air-conditioning. I will speak to you about the fact that I could see and carry out during my training course of technician for the period of November 12 at December 5, 2003 in company AXIMA CONTRACTING.

During this duration of training course I worked on the dimensioning of the radiators to install on the whole of the building site "Theatre of Odéon" according to the calculation of the losses in more of the architectural constraints and the technical possibilities on site. This work had been to give me by my Master of training course Mr. LELANIER which gave me a way of working and to make calculations.
I also attended an appointment with the suppliers of the radiators with which we could discuss the price and the number of radiator. They also provided us one of their new magazine on their radiators with which I could make my calculations with more precise details. To draw the radiators on the plans and to be able to present them at the architect and to obtain his approval I worked on a software which is called "autocad" and thanks to which we can make the drawing on computer.
A faith that I had finished to dimension the radiators I have to defer all the characteristics of those on a table indexing them by levels and buildings. What enabled me to work on the software "Excel" and to learn how to use it. Each Wednesday there was an appointment of building site to present the evolutions of research with the various trade associations and to determine the material which we were going to install. This training course will have enabled me to acquire experiment in my field and to work with really qualified people.

jackspeese · 06-11-2004, 04:58 PM

Miki:

Je t'en prie de m'envier le texte original ecrit en francais, soit au travers de ce forum soit a mon courriel personel, car il y'en a des phrases que je ne comprends pas bien moi-meme dans ce texte anglais, bienque pour la plus part tu l'as traduit bien.

06-11-2004, 04:58 PM	#2 (permalink)
jackspeese International Forum Fan Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 497 jackspeese is on a distinguished road	Miki: Je t'en prie de m'envier le texte original ecrit en francais, soit au travers de ce forum soit a mon courriel personel, car il y'en a des phrases que je ne comprends pas bien moi-meme dans ce texte anglais, bienque pour la plus part tu l'as traduit bien.
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