jp1984

Bonsoir! J'aimerai avoir une correction du texte si dessous qui doit comprendre beaucoup de fautes. J'espère que qqn pourra m'aider

We talk about « Diverted reality ».
First, we’ll enumerate the different kind of diverted reality because we thought about a lot of them but we won’t presented all! We haven’t got any time!
There are dreams, alcohol and drugs and cinema; that’s the subjects that we give details of them later. But there’s arts, books, photography, beliefs of each of us,…and a lot of other too!
Well there’s a lot of different kind of diverted reality. Everybody got his own form of reality (in his dreams, in his perception of the world, in his beliefs,…). Our beliefs can changed our world vision and turn it into our own world perception. Of course our (manière de vivre) influence our (maniere) to the world and inevitably our perception of reality. SO, now we’ll detail three kind of diverted reality and we wish you’ll react and you’ll share your experiences! Thank You.

pluiepoco

We talk about "Diverted reality".
First, we’ll enumerate the different kinds of diverted realities because we thought a lot about them but we won’t present all! We haven’t got any time!
There are dreams, alcohol and drugs and cinema; those are the subjects of which we will give details later. But there are arts, books, photography, beliefs of each of us,…and a lot of other too!
Well there are a lot of different kinds of diverted realities. Everybody got his own form of reality (in his dreams, in his perception of the world, in his belief,…). Our beliefs can change our world vision and turn it into our own world perception. Of course our lifestyles(manière de vivre) influence our style (maniere) to the world and inevitably our perception of reality. So, now we’ll detail three kinds of diverted realities and we wish you’ll react and you’ll share your experiences! Thank You

The_FD

Voici quelques menues corrections en plus de celles (pertinentes) de Pluipoco


First, we’ll enumerate the different kinds of diverted realities because we thought a lot about them but we won’t present all! We haven’t got enough time!
There are dreams, alcohol and drugs and cinema; those are subjects which we will give details later. But there are arts, books, photography, beliefs of each of us,…and lots of others too!
Well there are a lot of different kinds of diverted realities. Everybody has his own form of reality (in his dreams, in his perception of the world, in his belief,…). Our beliefs can change our world vision and turn it into our own world perception. Of course our way of life (manière de vivre) influences our point of viewof the world and inevitably our perception of reality. So, now we’ll detail three kinds of diverted realities and we wish you’ll react and you’ll share your experiences! Thank You

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jp1984

Merci pour cette correction! C'est très sympa de votre parti