lettre de motivation, cover letter

pucette2008 · 10-03-2009, 03:20 PM

Hello, I have written a cover letter for a job and need help from english native speakers to make it a bit smater

So please have a look it is not very long,
any advice or correction will be helpful
thanks a lot

Dear Sir or Madam,
Telesales Education Consultant
I am interested in working for Education First. I am a graduate in modern languages and have a lot of experience in costumer jobs as well as sales. I am well travelled, studied and work in different countries. I am French mother tongue and also speak Italian fluently.
My previous jobs in the tourist industry abroad have enabled me to improve my communication skills considerably. My experience in sales has proved to be an efficient way for me to become a sales person, with good interpersonal skills, able to adapt to different customer profiles. I have worked as a promoter in many fields, from tourism to music festivals and always managed to reach my goals (commission based).
As a telesales Education consultant at EF, I would bring a focus on quality and effectiveness. Furthermore, I work well with others, and I am very motivated. The position you offer corresponds to my career goals as I enjoy working in a multicultural, linguistic related context, and more importantly I find interest in sales.
I have myself studied at EF London and therefore already had an insight of your company. Having this experience might as well help promoting language programs accurately and probably even more convincingly.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully

Katie001 · 10-10-2009, 12:10 AM

Dear Sir or Madam,
Telesales Education Consultant
I am interested in working for Education First. I am a graduate in modern languages and have a lot of experience in client relations as well as sales. I am well travelled, studied and have worked in different countries. Besides english, I speak french (my first language) and italian fluently. My previous jobs in the tourist industry abroad have given me well developed communication skills. My sales experience developed my marketing and interpersonal skills, which enable me to adapt to different customer profiles and make the sale. I have worked as a promoter in many fields, from tourism to music festivals and always managed to reach my goals (commission based).
As a telesales Education consultant at EF, I would bring a focus on quality and effectiveness. Furthermore, I work well with others, and I am very motivated. The position you offer corresponds to my career goals as I enjoy working in a multicultural, linguistic related context, and more importantly, I find in sales interesting.
I have myself studied at EF London and therefore already havean insight into your company. Having this experience might as well help promoting language programs accurately and probably even more convincingly.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully

AudreeArrington · 11-14-2009, 10:31 AM

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I am webmaster. This is really excellent post. Its a very helpful site.

10-03-2009, 03:20 PM	#1 (permalink)
pucette2008 Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 66 pucette2008 is an unknown character at this point	lettre de motivation, cover letter Hello, I have written a cover letter for a job and need help from english native speakers to make it a bit smater So please have a look it is not very long, any advice or correction will be helpful thanks a lot Dear Sir or Madam, Telesales Education Consultant I am interested in working for Education First. I am a graduate in modern languages and have a lot of experience in costumer jobs as well as sales. I am well travelled, studied and work in different countries. I am French mother tongue and also speak Italian fluently. My previous jobs in the tourist industry abroad have enabled me to improve my communication skills considerably. My experience in sales has proved to be an efficient way for me to become a sales person, with good interpersonal skills, able to adapt to different customer profiles. I have worked as a promoter in many fields, from tourism to music festivals and always managed to reach my goals (commission based). As a telesales Education consultant at EF, I would bring a focus on quality and effectiveness. Furthermore, I work well with others, and I am very motivated. The position you offer corresponds to my career goals as I enjoy working in a multicultural, linguistic related context, and more importantly I find interest in sales. I have myself studied at EF London and therefore already had an insight of your company. Having this experience might as well help promoting language programs accurately and probably even more convincingly. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully
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10-10-2009, 12:10 AM	#2 (permalink)
Katie001 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 111 Katie001 is an unknown character at this point	Dear Sir or Madam, Telesales Education Consultant I am interested in working for Education First. I am a graduate in modern languages and have a lot of experience in client relations as well as sales. I am well travelled, studied and have worked in different countries. Besides english, I speak french (my first language) and italian fluently. My previous jobs in the tourist industry abroad have given me well developed communication skills. My sales experience developed my marketing and interpersonal skills, which enable me to adapt to different customer profiles and make the sale. I have worked as a promoter in many fields, from tourism to music festivals and always managed to reach my goals (commission based). As a telesales Education consultant at EF, I would bring a focus on quality and effectiveness. Furthermore, I work well with others, and I am very motivated. The position you offer corresponds to my career goals as I enjoy working in a multicultural, linguistic related context, and more importantly, I find in sales interesting. I have myself studied at EF London and therefore already havean insight into your company. Having this experience might as well help promoting language programs accurately and probably even more convincingly. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully
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11-14-2009, 10:31 AM	#3 (permalink)
AudreeArrington Brand New Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 1 AudreeArrington is an unknown character at this point	Hi hi I am webmaster. This is really excellent post. Its a very helpful site.
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