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Old 06-17-2009, 02:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Bonjour,

je joue régulièrement à Stalker, et j'utilise un mod pour renouvelé mon plaisir de jeux. Seul problème, ce mod est en anglais. Étant en seconde, mon niveau d'anglais n'est pas très fameux, mais profiter de ce mod en français serait pour moi réellement intéressant.
Je peux, tout de même, me débrouillé avec un dictionnaire, mais la quantité de texte à traduire est relativement importante, d'où mon envie d'être aidé. Je vous met ici, dans un premier temps, une partie de ce texte. Le texte est, à quelques endroits, légèrement familier. A noté que ce texte est déjà un traduction du russe vers l'anglais.


Pouvez vous m'aider à cette tâche ?
Merci d'avance.

"Recording 1: ... during that we saw the whole process from beginning to the end, regardless of Monolith soldiers that have surrounded the Mosquito Bald in a tight ring, trying to cover the transmutation process and the artefact itself from an accidental witnesses. But Artiom was standing quite close, so using binoculars he could see the artefact, that has been thrown into the anomaly quite clearly. It was an Acidic Porcupine (quite a weird name, but that's what the stalker that has created it called, we've checked that). After nine hours, at night, the artefact was thrown back out by the anomaly. Now we need to take it from the Monolith soldiers. Artion has offered to do that during their next pray to the Monolith. It should start in around 40 minutes. After I return, I want to take care of that clever guy, I think you'll support me, Vladislav Leonidovitch..."

"Recording 1: ...they got me on the way out of the village... five of them were... we couldn't even report our coordinates, the support group is just waiting... They shot Andrey Semionovith's leg in fron of me, bitches! They have led us for a long time, I was carrying Andrey Semionovitch... I didn't even know that they had an underground secret place here. Andrey Semionovitch is coping, these bastards have made a bandage for him and told me that they will get their revenge from us for killing their brothers... Andrey Semionovitch was thrown into a cage next to mine, he was unconscious already... they've untied my hands and haven't even taken my PDA and my bag, just my weapon and ammo... \n\n Recording 2: ... don't know what this is... I don't know... it's not a bloodsucker, it's not a chimera... it's not a... It has crawled out of the pit when they started to sing! They've opened Andrey Semionovitch's cage door... it didn't touch them, it went for the cage straight away... it has got in there... and... IT STARTED TO EAT HIM! HE WAS STILL ALIVE AND HAS SCREAMED!!! IT WAS EATING HIS FACE AND HE WAS WHEEZING AND TRYING TO..."

"Recording 1: «I found a dead stalker, all that was left of him, really, near a Springboard anomaly. He had a Kolobok in his rucksack, a really strange one, it was freaking shining. I had a quick thought about it and decided to throw my Kolobok into the Mosquito Bald and see what happens. It's a pity, to be honest, I could get a lot of drink by selling it, but... stuff it, I'll try the trick anyway» \n\n Recording 2: «I'm waiting for three hours already, shout a loner zombie. Now I regret that I have put the Kolobok into the anomaly, damn it!» \n\n Recording 3: «Yes! Jumped out like a cork! Five hours have passed and it's here. Shining! I need to celebrate this with some drink!» \n\n Recording 4: «Phew! That was close! I'm always gonna walk around the Zone drunk now, I'd freaking die if I was sober! Met a bandit, he shot me with his pistol and his gun broke straight after the shot. So this bastard took out a knife and cut me! Killed it with a shotgun.» \n\n Recording 5: «It's not that simple. When I'm thinking about it sober, it all doesn't work out. For exmple, I clearly remember when that bandit has shot me, the bullet seemed to just change its direction. It didn't het me in the head, as though it got blown off... And his knife, he easily cut trough my coat, I remember that I felt the hit of the blade, yet all there is left on my stomach is a small cut, not even a scar. Maybe my Koloboks have helped? Steel Koloboks... Shining, bloody bastards. Anyway, some Steel Balls would've been cooler...»"

"Saratsin has brought with him some novice that he had caught. He says, that he hasn't killed him immediately because the guy was looking around in a weird way, as though he has been carrying something valuable. Stubborn milksop! We found an interesting Kolobok in his rucksack. Well, it looked like a Kolobok, but... There was something different about it. When we've asked him, what the hell is that thing in his bag, he kept silent. I respect that! Especially when he looked like a complete coward! Shved had to breake a couple of his fingers, before he finally started to talk. He had told us that this was a Steel Kolobok, that has been changed in a "Hachoir". Said, that you throw it in, leave it there for five hours and after that it becomes different. He's also said that it keeps you safer from bullets, decreases fire and cut damage, but is fucking radioactive. I've made up a cool name for it - a Titan Kolobok! Now I need to try out his trick and see whether he was telling the truth. But first of all, I need to find a Steel Kolobok..."

"This Hypermodification can be obtained by the transmutation of a mezzomodification Titan Kolobok in a "Champignon visqueux" anomaly. It gives its owner's skin immunity to cuts, decreases fire and chemical damage. It's also interesting because it generates some sort of a field around its wearer. That field changes the trajectory of the bullets, that have been shot towards the wearer. The inly disadvantage of this quite helpful hypermodificate is that it gives off radioactive rays."

"May He be in Eternity! May He change the World! Preceptor Viktor has told us of another success of his naturalists! Preceptor, as all of us is sure that He has again given us, His followers a gift to strengthen our faith! After a fight with a group of soldiers, that were guarding the scientists, Ostach, the phalanx leader has brought a Shell among with some bodies and salvage. He had sacrificed it with all the bodies to His Flame, but the Watchers, brother Akim and brother Liocho have found the Shell, that has been thrown out of the Burner anomaly after six hours. The artefact was giving off unusual light and that has proved to the Watchers that that was His sign. This changed Shell has been in two battles with a naturalist, Roman. On the way back his phalanx has met and had a battle with four burers. Brother Roman says that this modified Shell was making miracles – he has felt nearly no psy-attacks of the burers! Not only that, the artefact has somehow taken away most of the radiation that brother Roman had got. He has also noticed that all the time he was wearing the artefact he didn't want to eat. Truly, He is giving us bits of Eternity even now! Further experiments have shown that this artefact, called Controller's Skalp by the Qualitet makes its owner feel better and saves from chemical burns. Our Faith is growing and becoming even stronger day by day, for He remembers of us! May He be in Eternity! May He change the World!"

"... well, that was about half a month ago. On the night of the seventh's of July, in the block ¹3 a moving Burner anomaly has appeared. I was alone in that block, Max and Yura have left, yet I still can't work out, how... we've drunk quite a lot that night. So, as soon as I started getting ready for sleep near in the corner – freaking flame sticks out of a wall! 'Cause I was drunk, at first I thought that Timur Marinade has fixed a flamethrower he had found and is now having fun with it. Then another idea has appeared in my head: it could be a broken gas pipe – some time ago there was a kitchen behind the wall. However, I've quickly realized that the last time any gas could've been in these pipes was about fifteen years ago, got a bit confused and tried to put the fire out with water. It's only when I saw the flame moving across the wall, I've worked out what's what, but it was too late – I had enough time to grab my G-36, which was hanging on the wall, but not to get a bag with a Soul, that I found two days ago. I got quite sad, drank a bit more. Then, after about four hours I saw my Soul dropping out of the flame intact! It was quite weird, though, giving off light like a lamp. So I've grabbed it and put it into a container. After I woke up in the morning and saw a cuple of guys roasting a boar in the Burner, I've immediately remembered about the Soul. I've warned Max and went to scientists. The way to their laboratory wasn't the best one, but that's a different story. So, I came to them and gave them that Soul for measurements. Sakharov had long thoughts about it... The artefact could make its owner healthier, and, as Sakharov said, it could decrease the radiation doses that the wearer gets as well. Also this atefact (I've called it Soul Drops, sounds cool) makes its wearer slightly tired. Sakharov was even begging me to sell the artefact to him, but a clever idea has come into my head - I wanted to throw it into a Burner once more and see what would happen, and then bring it to the scientists for measurements again. He agreed, not immediately, though. So, I took the artefact and made my way to the tunnel - there are bloody loads of those Burners. I've thrown the artefact in and waited."

"The Droplets artefact needs to be put into an "Electrica" anomaly. The resulting modificate - Tears of Electra speeds up the process of getting radiation out of its wearer's body (the wearer becomes immune to doses lower 10mÇv/hour), and also makes its wearer less tired. No negative effects detected."

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Old 06-21-2009, 08:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hello Mouton :-)

As I said in my message, my french is not perfect, I am sure somebody who is good at french can correct the text or you can adapt it yourself.

The rest will follow as soon as I have more time :

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"Enregistrement 1 : … pendant cela nous avons vu le processus entier, dès le début jusqu’à la fin, indépendamment des soldats de monolithe qui ont entouré le Moustique Chauve dans un anneau serré, essayant de dissimiler le procédé de transmutation et l'artefact lui-même des témoins accidentels. Mais Artiom se tenait tout à fait à côté, ainsi utilisant des jumelles, il pourrait clairement voir l'artefact qui a été jeté dans l'anomalie. C'était un porc-épic acide (un nom tout à fait étrange, mais le rôdeur qui l'a créé l’a appelé ainsi ; on a vérifié cela). Après neuf heures, la nuit, l'artefact a été rejeté en dehors de l'anomalie. Maintenant nous devons le prendre des soldats de monolithe. Artion a offert de faire cela pendant leur prochain prie au monolithe. Il devrait commencer dans environ 40 minutes. Quand je retourne, je vais prendre soin de ce type intelligent, je pense que tu me soutiendras, Vladislav Leonidovitch… ;
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Old 06-21-2009, 08:45 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi Mouton :-)


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"Enregistrement 1 : … ils m'ont eu à la sortie du village… cinq d’eux, ils étaient… nous n’avons même pas pu rapporter nos coordonnées, le groupe de soutien attend juste… Elles ont tiré sur la jambe d’Andrey Semionovith devant moi, les salops! Ils nous ont menés pendant longtemps, j’ai porté Andrey Semionovitch Je n'ai pas même su qu'ils avaient un endroit secret souterrain ici. Andrey Semionovitch souffre, ces bâtards ont fait un bandage pour lui et m'ont indiqué qu'ils obtiendront leur vengeance de nous pour tuer leurs frères… Andrey Semionovitch a été jeté dans une cage à côté du mien, il était déjà inconscient… ils ont délié mes mains et n’ont même pas pris mon PDA et mon sac, juste mon arme et munitions…
\ n\ n Enregistrement 2 : … … Je ne sais pas ce qu'est ce… Je ne sais pas que… ce n'est pas un vampire, ce n'est pas une chimère… ce n'est pas… Elle a rampé hors du puits quand ils ont commencé à chanter ! Ils ont ouvert la porte de la cage d’Andrey Semionovitch … elle ne les a pas touchés, elle est allé vers la cage immédiatement… elle est là dedans… et… ELLE A COMMENCÉ À LE MANGER ! IL ÉTAIT ENCORE VIVANT ET AVAIT CRIÉ ! ! ! ELLE MANGEAIT SON VISAGE ET IL RESPIRAIT FORT ET ESSAYAIT DE… " ;
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Thanks a lot Elmiso


The next text to translate is here :

"Recording 1: «I found a dead stalker, all that was left of him, really, near a Springboard anomaly. He had a Kolobok in his rucksack, a really strange one, it was freaking shining. I had a quick thought about it and decided to throw my Kolobok into the Mosquito Bald and see what happens. It's a pity, to be honest, I could get a lot of drink by selling it, but... stuff it, I'll try the trick anyway» \n\n

Recording 2: «I'm waiting for three hours already, shout a loner zombie. Now I regret that I have put the Kolobok into the anomaly, damn it!» \n\n

Recording 3: «Yes! Jumped out like a cork! Five hours have passed and it's here. Shining! I need to celebrate this with some drink!» \n\n
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Hi

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"Enregistrement 1 : « J'ai trouvé un stalker mort, tout ce qui restait de lui, vraiment, près d'une anomalie de Springboard. Il a eu un Kolobok dans son sac à dos, vraiment étrange, il brillait mysterieusement. J'ai eu une pensée rapide à ce sujet et décidé de jeter mon Kolobok dans le moustique chauve pour voir ce qui se produit. C'est dommage, pour être honnête, je pourrais obtenir beaucoup de boisson en la vendant, mais… égal, j'essayerai le truc de toute façon » \n\n

Enregistrement 2 : « J'attends trois heures déjà, crie un zombi solitaire. Maintenant je regrette d’avoir jeter le Kolobok dans l'anomalie, sacré bleu ! » \n\n

Enregistrement 3 : « Oui ! Sauté comme un bouchon ! Cinq heures ont passé et il est ici. Brillant ! Je dois célébrer ceci en buvant quelque boisson ! » \n\n
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Thanks !

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Recording 4: «Phew! That was close! I'm always gonna walk around the Zone drunk now, I'd freaking die if I was sober! Met a bandit, he shot me with his pistol and his gun broke straight after the shot. So this man took out a knife and cut me! Killed it with a shotgun.»

Recording 5: «It's not that simple. When I'm thinking about it sober, it all doesn't work out. For exmple, I clearly remember when that bandit has shot me, the bullet seemed to just change its direction. It didn't het me in the head, as though it got blown off... And his knife, he easily cut trough my coat, I remember that I felt the hit of the blade, yet all there is left on my stomach is a small cut, not even a scar. Maybe my Koloboks have helped? Steel Koloboks... Anyway, some Steel Balls would've been cooler...»"

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